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It's been years since I've penned a poem, but here it is anyway..

I know it is depressing, do not tell me this. Constructive criticism is appreciated though.

Hey all! I'm back in school so that probably means I'll be posting regularly again. Added another monologue from Death again, hoping all of you enjoy these stories and I'm not wasting space on the internet. Not that that is a problem... Anyway, some things about this peice; I read somewhere that adding a "~" at the end of a sentence makes it sarcastic so I thought I should try to use it a little. And I'm not sure if I should right more in depth about things that I mention or if I should keep it nice and short? I don't know, but comment on anything you like, any and all criticism is welcome.

An old class assignment I digged up.

It was supposed to be more simple and straightforward.

But I remember, I couldn't help myself from twisting it up

Which results with this

I'm back, for now! I haven't posted in a while because I've been a bit busy lately!!! Oh who am I kidding? I've been lazy, that's why I haven't posted anything... But that's not important right now! So I haven't written any poetry lately, but I still have my stories I need to post and this is the second in that little series thing. Again it's in the persona of Death and I got this story in my mind when I heard of how some soldiers would be homeless when they returned from overseas and I figured I would expand on that idea. Any criticisim is welcome and appreciated! I'll post if I can motivate myself to do so!