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ramonathompsont commented on: Everything I Got by 1SP 1 hour 8 min* ago* this would make an awesome: this would make an awesome song! [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: LIMP PENIS by georgeschaefer 1 hour 41 min* ago* The shock value brings value: The Shock Value this work provides for me delivers both value and shock separately but at the same time. This piece doesn't hide behind abstractions. The shock of the central metaphor drives me to confront the same frustration of unentertaining pep rallies for myself. It is a blunt illustration for everyone. [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: \|\| मातृभूमि ( माँ ) तुझे प्रणाम \|\| by Balmishra 2 hours 7 min* ago* See nature as a blessing: It's encouraging for me to see nature as a blessing. The rising sun applying a tilak. The moon showering its radiant light. River singing. Birds chirping their melodies. Nature itself becomes a priest performing rituals for the Motherland. [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: \|\| दंश ले जो तू मुझे, तो नींद आ जाए \|\| by Balmishra 2 hours 20 min* ago* I value your spiritual undertone.: I value the Spiritual Undertone this piece exhibits. Love flows from the body to the soul. It becomes a cleansing river, a rihjhar — a sacred stream. [ go to comment ]
1SP commented on: 'हां तुम !' by Balmishra 2 hours 35 min* ago* I embrace your romantic metaphors.: I embrace the Romantic Metaphors you use. Lips as a wine tavern (Lab tere madhushala): Suggests intoxication and sweetness. Fairy of dreams and nectar cup (Swapn ki pari, amrit pyala): Idealizes the beloved as perfection and divine beauty. Snake and Sandalwood (Chandan se lipte bhujang): A metaphor often used in Hindi poetry to depict inseparable, intense, and passionate embrace. [ go to comment ]
Jesster commented on: Good Girl by Jesster 13 hours 31 min* ago* Some wounds reopen an bleed out: Healing seems a constant [ go to comment ]
Teytonon commented on: Good Girl by Jesster 22 hours 35 min* ago* One definition of..: One definition of obedient = O bed I ent er.. Some scars take a lifetime to heal. Some never do. Hope you are well. [ go to comment ]
Teytonon commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 1 day 3 hours* ago* Hi. Thanks for..: Hi. Thanks for responding. Yes, that's the reason, to the eye may not look pleasin' Though it's grammatically incorrect A correction don't expect Nice to hear from you. Take care. [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Canvas by vatchejames 1 day 6 hours* ago* This is excellent, but that: This is excellent, but that final stanza soars to the skies in a triumph of real poetic language. [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Maestro by vatchejames 1 day 6 hours* ago* This is a brilliant use of: This is a brilliant use of language and metaphor!!!!! [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd-13d commented on: DAILY GRATITUDE BOOKS by joy 1 day 6 hours* ago* Also excellent!!!: Also excellent!!! [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd-13d commented on: TO ALL THE BOOK BANNERS OUT THERE by joy 1 day 6 hours* ago* Excellent and timely!: Excellent and timely! [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd-13d commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 1 day 7 hours* ago* Not sure of its: Not sure of its function---just to make the rhyme? [ go to comment ]
Teytonon commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 2 days 5 hours* ago* Regarding your comment..: Regarding your comment, about it what? [ go to comment ]
S74rw4rd-13d commented on: The story of Val by Teytonon 2 days 13 hours* ago* In the first stanza, "she: In the first stanza, "she shoot he?"!!!!!! [ go to comment ]