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djtj commented on: the shallow trench of your stride by redbrick 11 hours 47 min ago
Curls with your breath: Curls with the shape of your breath. Brillant. Fabulous image of walking in the footprints of those who went before us. Stones still cooling. Nicely done 
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Teytonon commented on: still find myself waiting for your return by Daniel-59 22 hours 55 min ago
This IRS agent..: This IRS agent needs to get a life!
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Teytonon commented on: Just spank me by ms.elfy 1 day 2 min ago
It would be my pleasure..: It would be my pleasure (sing to We Are Family - Sister Sledge) Pow pows on the butt Takd your pants off Keep your mouth shut  Pow pows on the butt Afterwards, your butt's gonna sting You did something that raised my blood pressure  It is very high I'll do something that won't give me pleasure  You're gonna cry Come over here I'll give you pow pows That's what I said After I'm done Look at your butt It will be cherry red Pow pows on the butt Keep your pants on Keep your mouth shut..
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ramonathompsont commented on: Dawn of a New Day by americanprayer 2 days 5 hours ago
You are good. very good. I: You are good. very good. I see a lot of promise ahead for you as a writer. best of luck.
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Teytonon commented on: That damn cream!!! by randyjohnson 1 week 22 hours ago
I originally was going to..: I originally was going to say how sorry I was that the cream you purchased ate your penis. I was happy to see the Author's Note that it didn't really happen. None of that stuff works anyway. I've tried them all. Once I was so disgusted I flushed the cream and tube down the toilet. But the next day I discovered the toilet grew to twice its size! I couldn't even get in the bathroom, had to call the plumber. What a mess. Thanks for sharing.
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ramonathompsont commented on: The Phoenix by starlover2103 1 week 4 days ago
very inspiring. great job!: very inspiring. great job!
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ramonathompsont commented on: I Would Be by Ben_ 1 week 4 days ago
lovely write: lovely write
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Teytonon commented on: Mom says by hollow.point 1 week 5 days ago
What’s left to say..: What's left to say except..I am the walrus goo goo g'joob. Thanks for posting.
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ramonathompsont commented on: I'm Enough by elliot_jordan2003 1 week 6 days ago
Awesome awesome job  and yes: Awesome awesome job  and yes you are enough!
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ramonathompsont commented on: COMPLICATED GRIEF by starlover2103 2 weeks 2 days ago
a sad, sad write. brought: a sad, sad write. brought tears to my eyes.
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redbrick commented on: concrete currents by redbrick 2 weeks 3 days ago
That is gladdening news. Some: That is gladdening news. Some have that reaction when eating. As for me its more of an upper shoulder/torso shiver.  The gloss refers to that little spark or sheen in speech when in this instant the creole peeks and seeps through into an otherwise flawless accent. I guess it's a kind of feature for bilinguals and multilinguals. Exotic or just a hint of, is probablly the most understandable descriptor. Thank you so much for gracing this page.
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djtj commented on: concrete currents by redbrick 2 weeks 4 days ago
Fabulous: This made me do my happy seat dance. When I like a poem I do a little, "I like that" wiggle. Loved the images of the kanji strokes, arabesco curves, creole gloss. I admit to having to look up some references, which I love to do. Creole gloss ? Searching for a streetlight poem. Great ending So happy to find a poet to follow.
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ramonathompsont commented on: Purpose by americanprayer 2 weeks 6 days ago
very poweful and moving: very poweful and moving piece. Great line about how friends have become ghosts.
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elliot_jordan2003 commented on: Brighter Than Yesterday by elliot_jordan2003 3 weeks 22 hours ago
Thank you so much: I appreciate the kind words..  
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ramonathompsont commented on: Brighter Than Yesterday by elliot_jordan2003 3 weeks 2 days ago
perfect from start to finish: perfect from start to finish
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