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S74rw4rd157 commented on: O Frenzied Light by redbrick 2 hours 25 min ago
This poem's language is: This poem's language is deployed in such a way as to sound ancient and archaic, instead of contemporary, and that is a real feat of writing right there.  I applaud the way you demonstrate such poetic skill.
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S74rw4rd157 commented on: hymn of the exiles by redbrick 12 hours 16 min ago
I look forward to that!: I look forward to that!
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redbrick commented on: hymn of the exiles by redbrick 13 hours 4 min ago
Thanks S74rw4rd157. Will look: Thanks S74rw4rd157. Will look into unveiling the rest should it be there to unveil.
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S74rW0rd123d commented on: hymn of the exiles by redbrick 21 hours 3 min ago
This all too brief poem: This all too brief poem sounds like a working script for a film that only a director, like Kubrick had been, could adequately handle.
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S74rW0rd123d commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, ὡσαννά Hebrews 11:21 by S74rw4rd157 1 day 8 hours ago
I agree, 110%.  : I agree, 110%.  
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redbrick commented on: POETRY ABORTED by georgeschaefer 1 day 8 hours ago
There are times when I: There are times when I realise that I am the 'hobo on the tracks' that interrupts Poetry that I am attempting to keep from being from being aborted.
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redbrick commented on: UNDER SEASHELLS by georgeschaefer 1 day 8 hours ago
The blowing in/from the sand: The blowing in/from the sand always fascinated me. Sometimes it comes across as raspberry kisses of the seashore. This is a very moving piece.
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redbrick commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, ὡσαννά Hebrews 11:21 by S74rw4rd157 1 day 8 hours ago
How amazing that they walked: How amazing that they walked together, fellowshipped and supped together, in the Christophanic accounts of the Angel of the LORD 
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redbrick commented on: thread-diving by redbrick 1 day 11 hours ago
What struck me most is that: What struck me most is that the infamous rat race has also overtaken the online poetry world. And so we adapt and battle our way through
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S74rW0rd123d commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Repentance As Lazarus Saturday Becomes Palm Sunday by S74rw4rd157 1 day 11 hours ago
Thank you very much for those: Thank you very much for those words.
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S74rW0rd123d commented on: thread-diving by redbrick 1 day 12 hours ago
This one of the TIMELIEST: This one of the TIMELIEST Poems I have ever read here, and it presents a very shrewd and observant view of what I believe s a universal situation.  Only a real Poet could have written this; no wannabe could measure up!
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S74rW0rd123d commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; After F. Tyutchev's Poem, "Ya Lyuteran Lyublyu Bogosluzhen'e" by S74rw4rd157 1 day 12 hours ago
Thank you, very much, for: Thank you, very much, for sharing that with me!
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redbrick commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; After F. Tyutchev's Poem, "Ya Lyuteran Lyublyu Bogosluzhen'e" by S74rw4rd157 1 day 13 hours ago
Reminds me of how I: Reminds me of how I periodically would attend a different denomination's worship service just to mix it up a bit, as the saying goes.
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redbrick commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Repentance As Lazarus Saturday Becomes Palm Sunday by S74rw4rd157 1 day 14 hours ago
Most moving expression, where: Most moving expression, where godly sorrow leads to sincerest repentance and thereby grace and tendermercies flow
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redbrick commented on: against the age by redbrick 2 days 13 hours ago
Ozymandias is definitely an: Ozymandias is definitely an influence however distant in the past it may be, so even if the reference or allusion though not direct cannot be denied completely. I was experimenting intentionally with the dithyramb which resembles a great part of my early writing voice. So it must be a blend of sorts of 'this and that.' Thanks so much for having picked that out
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