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Panglossy-Anna commented on: Jesus is my Real Estate Agent by Panglossy-Anna 20 hours 32 sec* ago* High Five!?! : High Five!?! [ go to comment ]
redbrick commented on: outsourced by redbrick 1 day 3 hours* ago* It wasn't the main intent but: It wasn't the main intent but it wasn't a banned image-movement either. A much welcome reading, nevertheless [ go to comment ]
redbrick commented on: caterpillar returning by redbrick 1 day 11 hours* ago* Perhaps : This was too densely compressed, the Swan being likened to a (far) cousin of the duck genus and a caterpillar chrysalis in one go, recalling the tale of the "ugly duckling" [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: Parking meter by Tsenumaic 1 day 15 hours* ago* Clearly the mark of a genius.: Clearly the mark of a genius. It's absolutely exceptional, the awkward first stanza, and then the scene conjures beautifully with just a couple perfectly placed words, and the last line that commands a full swing bringing you back up to the title for a sort of ouroboros epiphany!!! Unbelievable, dude, and it was certainly a honor to have had the privilege to witness. [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: The Tin Box by Wordman 1 day 15 hours* ago* Oh, God, this is just: Oh, God, this is just awesome. The emotion goes full throttle. Heart wrenching in all the right ways. The kaleidoscopic kiln, redemption by memory. [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: outsourced by redbrick 1 day 20 hours* ago* Question: was it your: Question: was it your intention to invoke a very vampiric sense of dread? Again, I love the rubber ducky and the contrast it endows to the otherwise rather eerie nature of the poem. [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: Jesus is my Real Estate Agent by Panglossy-Anna 1 day 20 hours* ago* Ahhh, there's that flawless: Ahhh, there's that flawless dialogue. You hit all the right notes. The hammer swings, the brass bell dings! Hi-score! You know it's good when you couldn't delineate if it's fact or fiction. The grace of language blends the mundance with your signature sparkle, sister. Yup. [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: caterpillar returning by redbrick 1 day 20 hours* ago* duckling's cousin...: duckling's cousin... interesting... i suppose they do both flutter, one maybe more so than the other... but ducks flounder not just in flight but say as they may be bathing in a lake... lots of big words followed with that last line of sudden punching whimsy to seal the deal... [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: No words by thelostpoet 1 day 20 hours* ago* That amazing figurine avatar: That amazing figurine avatar is what drew me to view your page, and let me tell you what follows does not disappoint!! Congatulations, you gained a fan today. [ go to comment ]
LittleLennonGurl commented on: Hello Blue Wave by LittleLennonGurl 2 days 2 hours* ago* Thank you!: Thank you! And yeah I hope it does too. We need this madness to end, we need our country back. [ go to comment ]
ramonathompsont commented on: Hello Blue Wave by LittleLennonGurl 2 days 4 hours* ago* praying it all works out.: praying it all works out. good write! [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: Hypersensitivity by Panglossy-Anna 3 days 17 hours* ago* trail of breadcrumbs: to me this reads like a riddle and a dandy proper one also [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: THE DAY URIEL CALLED OUT TO MAN by saigrafio 4 days 20 hours* ago* Oooo, balloon bible baboons!: Oooo, balloon bible baboons! Got me feeling tipsy too! [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: The Proposal by Panglossy-Anna 4 days 21 hours* ago* Stop deleting your stuff!!!: Stop deleting your stuff!!! Where did the bit about Zelda's glinting necklace go??? That one had me hypnotized!!! [ go to comment ]
Teytonon commented on: Hypersensitivity by Panglossy-Anna 1 week 2 days* ago* Short, but sweet..: Short, but sweet. I'm blown away. [ go to comment ]