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Thank you most kindly.  Sorry: Thank you most kindly.  Sorry for the delayed reply, I have been, yet again, unwell, and a little scatterbrained thiis week.

Revisiting this, I find it: Revisiting this, I find it just as powerful and eloquent as the first time I read it.

My deepest gratitude for your: My deepest gratitude for your spot on insights, brilliant exploration of my intent and, most of all, your cherished support. It means more than you know. And coming from a gifted Poet with the ability to move readers, sometimes to tears, your comments are treasures to me.   Just not enough ways to say . . . Thank you!

It's always a joy to read and: It's always a joy to read and comment on your work. Thank you for the kind words. 

Cutting people off in traffic: Cutting people off in traffic is a mighty metaphor wielded in this poem. Good stuff

I felt it all as if every: I felt it all as if every word  was my own, only it wasn't I just wish it was because it cam from a greater poetic mind and that is a sign of greatness. So many beautiful and deep lines highly emotional whilst maintaining a coldness or bereft mood that is a very difficult thing to do indeed! My favourite lines :   "I remember being annihilated by love, burned to death by beauty.   Life was distilled  to one note:  just you and that was enough   A reat poem within a great poem! Ah beavis would be proud well as proud as I am surely to know you. What richness and depth distilled so well  I still search for signposts.... Just wow!  When ever fragments of you wash upon the shore or doze in your chair... how well you describe the missing to produce a guttural reaction in the reader...   Just... Wow! 

Except for the fifteenth: Except for the fifteenth line, this seems like a profound poem.  But to include God with that man's name seems blasphemous.  Other than that, a good poem.