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This is the first totally new poem I've written in about a year. I hope you enoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

-Kyla

My first try.

I wrote this poem yesterday, I guess I didn't feel good about something or someone.  I guess i was just tired of all the lies and the untruthness. I don't know how it sounds but I just wrote what ever came out from inside of me. We live in a world full of lies, hate, jealousy and confusion and maybe its bringing me down Sometimes And wrote something about it. 

Work in progress!

Help with title is needed and will be greatly appreciated!