Pain

Vein Of A Disturbed Heart

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Experience
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A poem I wrote while I was in one of the smaller streets of Manila, where a beggar approached me and asked for money in which i refused to give. Please do give your comments and insights! constructive criticism is highly appreciated!

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Just me letting out a lot of anger and frustration. It's pretty easy to lose faith when you're in the middle of a big battle, and someone just keeps trying to knock you down.

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Please comment. I'd like to hear your thoughts on this first poem.

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