Picture my pain

Picture my pain

For it's all that's left

An empty shell:

Its guest.

My mind

My soul

My own free will

Picture my pain

For it's all that's left

This internal, eternal, immortal

deamon of death.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Please comment. I'd like to hear your thoughts on this first poem.

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I know a lot about pain. It

I know a lot about pain. It helps, for me anyway, to write about it. Turning my pain into something more, like writing, is a good thing. If you have a lot of pain, and you keep writing as good as you do, you turn all of that into something positive and beautiful.

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That's what i've always

That's what i've always thought too, i use to be on this other poem site but then my enternet crash and it deleted the site and i could never find it that made me really depressed.


THE THREE C's OF LIFE:

CHOICES

CHANCES

CHANGES

You must make a choice to take a chance or your life will never change. - unknown

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Painpicture Welcome to Postpoems Madam

Painpicture Welcome to Postpoems Madam.Pain is what makes us pure.Pain is the acid test for relationships inside & outside the home.Nicey first post.But I don't know whether my paetty comments will inspire you coz there are hundreds of esteemed poets on this site.My sincerest good wishes shall be with you always no matter who says what about your posts.God bless you.


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Thanks so much i

Thanks so much i really appreciate what you've said. :) 


THE THREE C's OF LIFE:

CHOICES

CHANCES

CHANGES

You must make a choice to take a chance or your life will never change. - unknown