Music

Music (2024 challenge day 14)

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2024

use this new angle

looking from the core of the earth

to turn this heat upside down

surprise high notes make their way out of my throat

penny memories to nickel finger twists

to letting you hear this now

a journey no matter how many limbs I’ve lost

half the voices I chase cross the country

the other half tucked under my pillow

I can still give you this sound

faster than I can give you

my fingers

a smell from 10 years ago

the fleeting sunset

the pain in your chest

but really

isn’t it all the same

so make me a half rest in your closet

or a disco on the stage

as long as you

keep me in your head

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Written 3/27/24

Music

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Nagsasalita Rin Ba Ang Biyolin? (in Tagalog language)

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Dedicated to R.

 

Reedited: 03.13.2024 (I formatted the font size at this point, to make it more readable for commonly used gadgets, as the original font in the default seemed quite very small —for me, at least.)

 

 

(Mood:  Kevin Kern - Sad Melody, Violin & Piano)

 

 

Reedited:  03.06.2024 [23:22] Naway = Nawa'y, the verses, when transfered, were not divided during cutting & pasting the whole poem from another app..so the resulting format was retained as is (not grouped in verses, as it was originally formed).  Somehow, the format becomes part of the experimentation.

Amanda Antiques

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These are the lyrics to a new song I'm working. I would love any kind of feedback so I know that what I'm trying to convey is getting across. 

Music from a Forgotten Age

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Times in 2023
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The Sweetest Music

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Times in 2023
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know you through music

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2023
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Written 4/6/23

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—Nagsasalita rin ba ang Gitara?

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Reedited:  03.06.2024  (Title "—Nagsasalita din ba ang Gitara?" was reedited; replaced 'din' with 'rin' to conform with more acceptable Filipino grammar rules.

Fat kid

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New Lyrics
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Finished 2/3/23.

 Ok, my inspiration for this one was definitely Stephen Lynch, if you've never heard of him, I encourage you to look him up. He does stand up comedy, but with songs he writes. I would love it if he could put this to music one day. 

 

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