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taglamig (in Tagalog language)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Reedited 12.06.2022 [22:25];11.23.2022 [09:09]; 11.22.2022 [20:38]

 

 

1.  Prior changes have been made to this poem at an earlier time (but not enumerated them all at this moment).


2.  Changed the word "mukha" to "wangis" instead (just to avoid redundancy or the word being doubled in my verses).


3.  (11.23.2022)  Omitted a comma (placed formerly in following line: "o, baka.." (unedited version)


4. (12.06.2022) the line "parang itong asul sa taas," was changed to the grammatical "para itong asul sa taas,"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sa Tabing-dagat (in Tagalog/Filipino language)

Author's Notes/Comments: 

LEGAL DISCLAIMER:  This is a work of fiction.

 

Reedited 09.10.2022 03:06:  Filipino common ungrammatical use of "nang" vs. "ng", a crucial mistake was reincorporated to a reconstructed sentence, thereby changing some of the contexts a bit, after discovering this usage error.

 

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