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First poem, feedback would be awesome 

Just finished up this piece. Not much I can say about this poem, or rather would like to say as once again

(What a surprise) I wrote about one of my habits.

As usual comments and criqtues is welcome here.

This poem is about all the people who are alcholics, suicidal, emo, and drug addicts. The people who don't know what to do. This, this is what they feel, what I feel, what the world feels when in pain.

A poem about Celephais.

I was really feeling this when I wrote it a couple--few months back.. sometimes I wish it could of been longer.

ThoughtShock: A Manifesto Chapter 19 'The mark of a coward'

There really isint much to say about this piece, Other than it does have a very specail meaning for me, I hope this piece helps a person better understand their own demons..

I compiled this piece last night on christmas eve, however decided to wait until today to post it. Not much to comment about on this one honestly, but hope you enjoy it.