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Back in the 15th and 16th century Dizain poetry was made popular by the french. 10 lines // 10 syllables // ABABBCCDCD. PRETTY COOL. 

SANGUINE MOON - REFLEXTION OF MY TIMES WITH MY DAUGHTER, I CANT GET ENOUGH OF HER AND I FEEL SAD THAT ONE DAY IT WILL END, BUT I TAKE SOLICE IN THE FACT THAT SHE IS A GREAT GIRL AND THAT SHE WILL HANDLE ANYTHING THE WORLD THROWS AT HER. SHE IS SMART AND FUNNY. THAT MAKES ME HAPPY, AND HAPPY IS ALL I WANT. 

Reedited 10.25.2022:

1.  Replaced the word Conservancy with its more appropriate word designation for what I was thinking about by the time of its inception (I was mistaken at the proper word usage to mean the preservation of Japan's traditional buildings or architectures or, definitely, its own heritage reflected in many of its natural landscapes, notwithstanding its built environment (rojis, satoyama, Takayama City, et al).

2.  Reedited form, despite being a free-verse form, just to make one long line to not stand out

awkwardly from the seemingly uniformly ordered poem.

3rd Reedition (10.08.2022 [06:20]) Added the following, or beside the poem's title, as its subtitle: (American Norms).

2nd Reedition (10.08.2022 [05:56] )  Free verse was restructured by moving "—" in [deemed] more appropriate spaces because of its affective quality, like (perhaps) a function served by a "caesura" that could mean a lot, or contribute to,  the conveyance of the verses' very expressive qualities (in or by themselves).

Reedited (09.30.2022):  Added more content and more delineated tropes and shaped a more grammatical English in the mix up against one's switch between paradigms (of the vernaculars held or modified as part of one's evolving cultural history or embedded linguistic indentity).

Written 1/13/21

Forgotten

Theres not a day I don't think of the people that are missing in my life. One day Dad, I'll see you again. You've got me always looking up.

Literally did this in a matter of minutes, as I've always thought I was right to do poetry so I thought I'd give it a go.