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alone is a lonely place

Its often hard to express how i feel so i typed it up

First Poem! Hope you enjoy this, just want to know peoples opinions on this type of writing :)

This is a poem about thinking about making mistakes because you've been lonely for too long. I really love song lyrics and so I've more or less tried to adopt a style like that but mixed with some other literary devices. I don't really have a set meter so let me know if rythm is a problem. 

Probably reading too many tales of loneliness and lost love'

This is based on a conversation had on Sunday of Thanksgiving weekend of this year. It is raw and painful and I don't know what to do.