She told me that she didn't know
anymore what I thought we knew.
She told me she was thinking still
of where to go and what to do.
She told me that she loved me still
yet she thought it best she go.
She told me that she always would
but in her eyes it didn't show.
She left, and there I stood alone
as she swore I'd never be.
She left, and there I stood alone,
lost at home with her memory.
Beautiful
Very nice writing. And can completely relate to the feelings you are describing.
Good writing .. keep 'em coming
Very good, I can relate...
Here's what I got from reading it .. don't take it the wrong it is not made to offend ..just flowed out after reading your writing.
How quickly we fall in and out of lust
yet the heart break feels new everytime
She told you that she loved you
but inside she wasn't in love with you
she was in love with the fantasy of being in love.
She knew all along
And you knew it too
That she would walk away
Why did it seem so hard to stop her?
Memories of her are sweet
but they were never meant to be
Don't stand there so lonely
Don't wait on her to realize her mistake
Anger and sadness mix
Because now it all seems like lies
Taking a deep breath and one step at a time
Live your life
Don't linger in the memories of the past
I know these things are easier said than done
Scars may remain but the heart will mend with time.