Hello esteemed reader
I am always looking to better my writing and thus urge anyone who reads this to let me know what they think about it
Cheers,
T.
Written from the perspective of a very smart, materialistic and selfish lover.
first poem I have written, feedback very WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've never had anyone read any of my poems before, this is my first one that I have posted, let me know what you think! This is a poem about me and it is all true.
It rhymes in some parts and doesnt in others. I wrote this in 20 mins, basically spilling out my feelings about the topic.
