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first poem I have written, feedback very WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

I've never had anyone read any of my poems before, this is my first one that I have posted, let me know what you think! This is a poem about me and it is all true.

It rhymes in some parts and doesnt in others. I wrote this in 20 mins, basically spilling out my feelings about the topic. 

This poem is meant to represent the idea of an authority tell people who they are and who they should be, and punishing people for exploring and embracing their individualism. Although the Vanilla Bean Queen refuses to let you see the true of herself directly, the true of her is nonetheless exposed through her actions (i.e., "I SEE YOU").

A freestyle poem, that has a touch of sadness in it.

I believe we truly create our lives. What we live, we decided to live. You can never appreciate the good without the bad.