PostPoems Be Artistic. Be Creative. Be Inspired!

My first attempt at writing a sonnet, or any poety for that matter. I figured it would be a great way to learn to more fully appreciate the great poets! I would love any analysis, criticism or feedback. 

Just some thoughts on my ever-increasing number of friends who have yet to reach relationship goals... 

English version 

Life passes by so quick..I wonder if my mind is playing a trick..

On the primacy of experience.

"The Ones We Lost"