comments and opinions please?
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Well, here's a good way to end this after I've pushed aside a thought from my mind:
With a sword.
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I think this poem could be longer. it doesnt seem to me that it is finished
My first written poem. The title simply signifies the teenage years and I feel as if it really dug deep into my 17 year old head. Please tell me what you thought of it.