When I close my eyes
I hear this sound
Like a lullaby
Faint and distance
Sweet smells of nostalgia
Resilience
When I close my eyes
I taste these memories
Like how the sun dies
Mournful and Longing
Knowing by faith
Belonging
When I close my eyes
I feel this calling
Like the sunrise
Spirited and Near
I exhale encumbrances
No Fear
Clever title, great poem and
Clever title, great poem and I felt like this was about how much more you can see without your eyes. How you can feel much more life radiating around you. Great job :)
That's definitely what it's
That's definitely what it's about. I was trying to capture a feeling I felt last night. Only using the immediate things surrounding me. Happy you liked it ^__^
**if it's an eye for an eye, then we'll all go blind.**
Of course I like it, I try
Of course I like it, I try and do that with dreams/astral projection. This reminded me a lot of those experiences. Can't wait for more.
Oh yeah
Like it.
KS
Thank you :)
Thank you :)
**if it's an eye for an eye, then we'll all go blind.**