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Need You

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When you touch my body, it's electric,

I'm falling down, I'm feeling sea sick.

 

The light of my days has become you,

While the blood under my skin bleeds through.

 

Without your touch the world feels cold,

Inside my mind, the thoughts will fold,

 

Into each other until they transform to dust,

I wait for you to awake at dusk,

 

And return to me with all your love,

For without it I waste away to the above.

To Paddle One's Canoe Over Still Waters (A Poem About Fictitious Love Stories)

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Reedited on 11.23.2019 (I have supplanted the {minor misspelling of "light year"} but this time, I think I have added a period as its resulting emendation, due to a possible lack of it which was previously left unnoticed).

 

 

This is a repost from my Twitter platform & which has been edited for a very minor misspelling of "light year".  I have corrected the two-word noun.  For anything else that I might have edited (e.g., I might have also missed), that could only be involving a tweaking of the form (e.g., which might have been changed/affected by my copying & pasting method of the verses; either that or other copyediting stuff like by changing fonts/font sizes).  Thank you for checking it out.

when it comes to you.

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IF I Depend Upon You

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Ineffable Beauty and Unspeakable Grace come from the same source: the glorious power of inexpressible love. We, as humans, are allowed to view glimpses of it, brush by hints of it, hear melodic molecules dancing in the wind, but never are we submerged in its effervescent sacred omnipotence. We somehow delude ourselves to the point of believing we enmesh ourselves in it. Nothing could be further from the raw truth. We only scrape the surface,breathe a mere wisp, scantily touch the hem of the garment by imagining a human depiction of its true magnificence. The moment we reach out to grasp hold of it, it dissipates.