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? Due to the fact that I cant really decide what it is describing. Comment ideas if you would like.

This was the first thing I ever wrote, a couple of years ago. I just thought I'd post it. It was back before I became so annoyingly dark and depressive. Feedback is always appreciated!

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This poem is more of a child rhyme, its very pleasant.

A mini story from the eyes of young boy who's job is to shine shoes for anyone richer than himself. Shows how society uses the poor to there own accord to do what they want. Role reversal to show the rich how the poor live, but then reversed back as eventually the rich always triumph over the poor, as the world can appear money centred.

Put a good amount of thought into this. Any questions or suggestions? Open to all :)