love

to my dear friend, Idy

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taglamig (in Tagalog language)

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Reedited 12.06.2022 [22:25];11.23.2022 [09:09]; 11.22.2022 [20:38]

 

 

1.  Prior changes have been made to this poem at an earlier time (but not enumerated them all at this moment).


2.  Changed the word "mukha" to "wangis" instead (just to avoid redundancy or the word being doubled in my verses).


3.  (11.23.2022)  Omitted a comma (placed formerly in following line: "o, baka.." (unedited version)


4. (12.06.2022) the line "parang itong asul sa taas," was changed to the grammatical "para itong asul sa taas,"

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

YOU CANNOT KILL ME as fast as I can

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2022
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Written 10/31/22

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LOVE'S ECHO

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2004
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Another lost poem just found.

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easy/complex

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2022
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Written 9/7/22

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