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-jerlin (15Feb12)

True but not good.

This is a redraft of a very very old poem I wrote, as I obviously never posted it at the time I felt it was worthy to be published. Hope you enjoy this Lost Treasure.

I'd really appreciate honest feedback. Be as blunt as possible.

This is a little preview of an upcoming shortbook I'm going to be working on here and there when I find the time and motivation. ThoughtShock has been a project in the making for a bit now the goal is to make people think and to open their minds to make them ask questions, that will be the aim of this book "A Manifesto"

My take on our arrogance and how easily we forget how fragile we are. There are quite a few medical terms but can be understood as the poem flows. Bronchioles are divisions of the airways and I used purification instead of oxygenation. Please do leave constructive feed back. Thank you