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one of 9 poems on my road to recovery

This of course is a rough draft of chapter 8 I'm not entirely sure of it myself.
What do you think?

Freestyle. Created in 10 minutes or less after a horrible encounter with sin.

hmmm not sure about this one.

any criticism would be welcomed

I made this poem using video game titles. i will be making part 2 to this poem soon. I captialized the games so you can see how many i used. count for urself :) ~ also - Honorable Mentions : deadspace // heavy rain // deadrising // mass effect // fallout // darkness // prince of persia // uncharted // bad company // half life // max payne // street fighter // hitman

The boy I had a crush on had the same coffee mug as me. Ah to be young again!