PostPoems Be Artistic. Be Creative. Be Inspired!

I was going to post the first paragraph here, however considering it was intended to be a creative writing piece I decided to leave it in with the poem itself. As for the poem, It's probably one of my more darker pieces I've written to date. I am quite proud of this as it speaks to many of my thoughts and emotions. Your thoughts?

hmmm,
Where to start. So once again I've been suffering from writersblock. Was actually surprised I managed to choke this piece out, it's not my best work and infact not vary pleased with how it came out, Not really in sync with the original poem (Torture) this was actually going to be a new poem, however decided mix the two and ended up with this.. However though it's finished and while I do not like modifying my poems once they are completed, I may decide to revamp this one again haha.. Your thoughts?

The pendulum swing and time wines down , what will be your choice .Will you go up or go down

Why am I here, Can I make a difference ,or should I just the rest of the world and assimilate with no resistance.

I wrote this in English class today. I don't know if it's really a poem but it needed to be written and heard. It's what I think about or feel when i hear certain words.

Before we bit the fruit of knowledge, we were one with the source. Now, we have traversed far and this life is just one dream after another as we oscillate in the mire of duality.