hmmm,
Where to start. So once again I've been suffering from writersblock. Was actually surprised I managed to choke this piece out, it's not my best work and infact not vary pleased with how it came out, Not really in sync with the original poem (Torture) this was actually going to be a new poem, however decided mix the two and ended up with this.. However though it's finished and while I do not like modifying my poems once they are completed, I may decide to revamp this one again haha.. Your thoughts?
very good as always damien.
very good as always damien. you always said your writing wasnt the best, and i always disagreed. keep writing.
-Elfy*
It never ceases to amaze me
It never ceases to amaze me that a poet never thinks thier best work is thier best work, yet putit out for others to enjoy who judge quite worthy of high praise! This still belongs up there but that's just my humble opinion... ;) great read!
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thank you, always looking
Thank you, always looking forward to your comments!! haha and you are right it happens a lot, guess trying to find reassurance that they are wrong and it is worthy enough to be part of their work. Again thank you always for the kind words
I read nearly everything you
I read nearly everything you write! Time willing. :) I am never disappointed! Cheers SS.
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."