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Figured this would be longer, but I can't really think of anywhere else to take it.

another try at lyrics

Note* commas indicate change in tempo semi colleens indicate pause

need help on these lyrics of mine, and figure out a tune lol

This is the first metal song I wrote for my thrash band and is the second full song lyrics I've written, this one has a bit of language in it, I apologize to anyone who is offended, but I feel it is essential to this song and to express my feelings at the time I wrote it.

Unfinished lyrics. Still dabbling with it but I like where this is heading. I will updated it when I can come up with a possible chorus.