willow commented on: Ink Eyes by Anonymous 10 years 33 weeks ago
0.o I thought I was reading: 0.o I thought I was reading Shakespeare for a moment :)
The images and words are carefully chosen, leaving me speechless when it comes to a description of my reaction...
One word- Bravo!
Imprisoned by anothers:
Imprisoned by anothers love and protected by another, I know what I would choose too. I'd choose the protector, with love comes trust and friendship too, not imprisonment. Enjoyed reading your poem, makes me think about the quality of some relationships.
Wonderfull recount of a:
Wonderfull recount of a popular story. Frog changing into prince is one of my favourite stories of childhood. It's good to remenisce.
Yummy this sonnet makes:
Yummy this sonnet makes me hungary. Bring on Christmas time every year, what a great celebration and your poem suits too. Well written sonnet, I also liked the rhyming. Well done both of you.
In your poem you create:
In your poem you create such vivid imagery with your comments. Your poem encourages the reader to want to create a poem. A good poetic read.
I liked your poem about:
I liked your poem about the cat purring. I have a cat and don't know whether the cat purring is inspirational or a distraction, depends on my mood when creative writing.
That's very true! We owe just: That's very true! We owe just about everything to those women! I agree about the resolving of dating. I think that EVENTUALLY we'll be able ask out a guy without getting strange looks, or be seen as aggressive!
Shades Of Gray: We want equality, but we get it shades of gray. We can vote, make doctor appointments, work, and various things that we weren't always allowed to. Women had to fight hard to get us there and I respect them for it. They had to fight to get us the blessings of writing and sharing. Yet, when it comes to dating and other areas there aren't always black and whites, but shades of gray. I don't think it...
I totally agree! It shows: I totally agree! It shows that you two worked hard on it! It's amazing!
What I don't get is why it's still looked down upon for a girl to want to ask guys out! I think if we want to go out with someone, we should be able to go ahead and tell them!
Love the poem abunch!
thank you: thank you. i put a lot of time and thought into this as did dove. we face a lot of issues as women and it's liberating to take a stand on what you belive in. sometimes, as far as we've gotten with women's lib we're still facing some of the same issues, but when we speak up and stick together changes get made, we become a support system, and a resolution takes place. Hugs.
BEAUTIFUL! Amazingly done!: BEAUTIFUL! Amazingly done! Well done!! I read it 5 times, and then read it 5 more times! Literally! It made me actually feel what you were talking about! Captures the real message!!
A nice comfortable love:
A nice comfortable love poem, both assured of their love and for each other, also blissfully romantic. Loved every word you wrote, so well written and a good read.
This is beautiful. : I know Allets is just happy to have so many that love, and cherish her.
To know that we are here whenever she needs us,
or whenever she is ready to come back to us.
Always, we will be here.
<3 Hugs to all you guys~!
bishu commented on: Golden Love by Anonymous 10 years 43 weeks ago
Indeed Ms P_eyes... Ms Allets is a true poet: Indeed Ms P_eyes... Ms Allets is a true poet & bishu is nowhere near her. Like an ant and a star. Most of you are very very talented and write so nicely.When I read I find mine are weed.If she has her name on a book cover I'll be the happiest man.God be with her.What I like about her is that she never gives herself airs and never boasts about her works.As for you Mm PEyes,you know how to...
Thank you for the comment it: Thank you for the comment it is much appreciated. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem and I'll try writing another of this type. God Bless.
She is and will continue to: She is and will continue to be very missed. But who knows? We may get to see a book come out by Ms. Stella through this. I am hoping the very best comes out of her loss for her. She deserves ever bit of it. Nice poem, poetic.
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bishu commented on: Golden Love by Anonymous 10 years 44 weeks ago
A humble man is grateful and thankful Respected Madam Poetic_Eye: A humble man is grateful and thankful Respected Madam Poetic_Eyes for your kindness towards the Respected Madam Allets.-Fumbling-for-words-on-land
I believe venting is a good: I believe venting is a good thing if it doesn't impair a person's ability to do it in a controlled manner. There will always be words said in anger. It depends upon the person. There are some orators who becone very emotional during a speech...however, they have an awareness of their passion and have limits set on the escalation points they reach during a speech. Uncontrolled anger is different....
Lots of questions that many: Lots of questions that many people ask themselves...and some look forever to the outside for answers. Acceptance of truth is difficult, and yet we become stripped (through conditioned response), by parents, teachers, and society of our ability to accept it or toss acceptance aside as a "non-option", rarher than reach for a resolution of our disagreements.
Choice.
It is an option.
It...
Absolutely amazing: I love this poem, the story it tells is just breath taking! Just outstanding! Your wording is fantastic, i cannot wait to see what else you may post!
~ElleLeFronzaglio
Thank you! May 2014 bring a: Thank you! May 2014 bring a year of creative exploration without such distractions as work, money and bills, proceeded as and by 2013 :)
You filled my page with: You filled my page with lavender petals.... oh!!! Ok, no, they aren't real, just imagery created by your lovely words, my dear... ;-)
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thanks : thanks k.d. i did notice your dark vibe. i like my happy endings and trying to see what we should be thankful for, blessed with, and grateful for. not all of my poetry is "light hearted". I do have some darker pieces, but they're in the minority and i'd like to keep it that way.
i like this write as u might: i like this write as u might see from my poems i write with a dark vibe
but i love the prive of my country the things it represents and its flag
and i think some times we need to remind the people just how
importent these things are.. also i wanted to be the first to comment on this
Okay, Then There Is This: Prophetic, dreams are sometimes. Such powerful images painted with master strokes - I do not give praise of poems lightly or without true attachment to the lines emotionally. I feel like I've been to a blockbuster movie - each word an action scene, each line enviable and riviting. Your work is growing - like walking on the edge, just don't fall in growing - Your verse rocks, lad! -...