Love the feedback: love the feedback dove and bishu. i wouldn't worry about her wings bishu she's an expert sonnet writer, amazing poet, and will meet a challenge. her poetic lyrics will leave the sun's rays in disbelief as she soars making her poetry spread near and far.
I love it!!! So expressive of: I love it!!! So expressive of the one and only "Dove" of Post Poems.
"Poetic accessories dress up
lines with imagery beyond compare
when ruffled feathers get dunked in a cup
to make rhythmic meters with her poet care."
^^^ "trademark D"
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Hilarious !!!!!! Respected poetic_eyes: Hilarious !!!!!! Respected poetic_eyes.Glad that the funnybone is still there after the grey-black-pink-orange stuff .
thanks: thanks nightlight. i worked very hard on that line and fumbled to come up with the rhyme to fit the sonnet format. definitely worth the time and effort. HUGs. good night dear friend
thanks: thank you. smoothie you are the ink that drips from my pen upon my muse's paper to write a note of gratitude to write with an honest attitude while i slip some imagery to paint my page that makes your inspiration quake and your emotions begin to run down my page in a sea of poetic license connecting you to the lines of diction swapping out sights for words of expression. hugs
bishu: sometimes i write on apper and type it up here to share (besides that youc an read it better). other time my keyboard goes a clanking with poetry. nightlight inspired me to write, 'singing typewriter" by her response to this one.
night: nightlight you paint such beautiful images with your reply. if yoiu wanted you could turn that into a poem, slap on a title, and share the link here.
...as the feelings expressed: ...as the feelings expressed on paper swirl through the room like leaves from a changing tree in the fall of the year, the pages of life are turned to reveal the layers of what once had been covered. ...the leaves fall to the ground, the cat curls safely inside a feathered pillow...the empty cup steaming from it's brim hours earlier is placed in the sink, and peaceful slumber ends another season...
Poetic_Eyes or whatever.You know words to cause: Poetic_Eyes or whatever.You as well as nightlight1220 put words to cause adrenaline spurts ending with endorphin overflow.Nice social service Respected Poetic_Wyes And Respected Night_Wyes
TOT...no...the other .01 is: TOT...no...the other .01 is how each individual perceives you..that's what I mean. I don't necessarily agree that we see things as we are "made" to all the time...because of choice. Choice allows us to open our awareness to other perspectives...or not.
thanks night: thanks nightlight. i was looking at a picture of a red rose with a blue background and water droplets upon it's petal. it inspired me to write, especially when i've been thinking about who my true friends are and lucky i am to have them.
I agree with Respected nightlight's two words: I agree with Respected nightlight's two words.All is well till the rose dries & withers & fresh blooming roses are needed.What was that short story by HGWells "Dr Hedigers Experiment" Youth is as we see in the Magic Mirror made by our own imagination.So is friendship if compared with a lovely fresh rose.Why not allow the creations of God to remain on rose bushes instead of offering them...
This has so much heart I want: This has so much heart I want to kiss the screen! I enjoyed reading it. An ugly truth written with the flair only an artist could do.
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thanks: thanks. i respect them as well. they're both amazing poets and encourage, inspire, challenge me to keep writing and grow. i'm glad you enjoyed reading my poetry and took the time to leave feedback.
bishu commented on: "Amen" by Anonymous 11 years 5 weeks ago
No hesitation from me on that one Respected poetic_eyes: No hesitation from me on that one Respected poetic_eyes.Praise be to the One Above.~Forever your PP friend Popped Eye Sailor or whatever~
Respected Poetic_Eyes: Respected Poetic_Eyes.You put in nucleii which true poets can use.Great !!!!!!! Hoping for more & more butterflies on the site weaving words .BTW you appear to be a nice person since you have written to have been inspired by Respected SSmoothie & Respected nightlight1220 both of whom I truly respect & rever.They are both booster rockets on this site & you now appear to be...