Golden Love

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Golden Love 

Karyn Indursky

 

Upon the moon was a bashful smile

as he flirted with the stars twinkling

as the star would send him a kiss miles

away as a helpful hand to the sun sprinkling

 

her drummer's heart thudding in rhythms beat

as the moon's cheesy chest filled with love's pride

for the sun could make him blush heat

in night skies to ask her to be bride

 

with romance budding the sun abided

his request for thou love sang very true

and thou bright stars began to dance guided

by the sound of their love's glorious hue

 

so long as thy sun continues smiling

thou gold rings of love will be compiling

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Inspired by Bishu's poem dedicated to Allets.

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a.griffiths57's picture

    A nice comfortable love

 

 

A nice comfortable love poem, both assured of their love and for each other, also blissfully romantic. Loved every word you wrote, so well written and a good read.


 

 

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ashes_theartofburning's picture

This is beautiful.

I know Allets is just happy to have so many that love, and cherish her. 

To know that we are here whenever she needs us, 

or whenever she is ready to come back to us. 

Always, we will be here. 

<3 Hugs to all you guys~! 


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

nightlight1220's picture

She is and will continue to

She is and will continue to be very missed. But who knows? We may get to see a book come out by Ms. Stella through this. I am hoping the very best comes out of her loss for her. She deserves ever bit of it. Nice poem, poetic.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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A humble man is grateful and thankful Respected Madam Poetic_Eye

A humble man is grateful and thankful Respected Madam Poetic_Eyes for your kindness towards the Respected Madam Allets.-Fumbling-for-words-on-land


©bishu 

 

Poetic_Eyes's picture

bishu...

bishu i'm glad to have the inspiration from you and allets. you're both talented poets and dear friends. 

bishu's picture

Indeed Ms P_eyes... Ms Allets is a true poet

Indeed Ms P_eyes... Ms Allets is a true poet & bishu is nowhere near her. Like an ant and a star. Most of you are very very talented and write so nicely.When I read I find mine are weed.If she has her name on a book cover I'll be the happiest man.God be with her.What I like about her is that she never gives herself airs and never boasts about her works.As for you Mm PEyes,you know how to light the fuse for sparking writers with inspiration.I am looking forward to Mm Allets' return to this spider site holding the earthy writers in its strong web:)

 

She looks she looks to the starry sky

Her thoughts like a tiny pin shoots up

Renting the unfathomed space above

Into the remotest corners of universe

Verses trickle down as gentle fall

Hued luminescent leaves in late autumn.......

Lighting the pages on postpoems

Shining like beacons attracting aspirants.....


©bishu