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May your quill fly lightly on: May your quill fly lightly on the wings of the dove, And let all of your words be rooted in unconditional love!!   Love it! ..

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thanks : thanks bishu

Long long wait Respected P_Eyes: Long long wait Respected P_Eyes .Yet I am hopeful that someday good sense will prevail.

Chubby Delight or slim Grace ??: Chubby Delight or slim Grace ?? Interesting point to ponder on ......Fat fish last more n gives more to eat  ~from~a~hydrated~well~fed~sailor~

Loved the description "Ivory soft clouds": Loved the description "Ivory soft clouds" "diamond ring truly blue" ... how figurative!!!!!! "binoculars as strong as the sun" wow!!!!!!! Cream of words Respected Poetic_Eyes.

I hear what you are saying,: I hear what you are saying, but I feel that in many cases, the child is curious, and too little answers by parents who had too little answers or developed negative connotations about their own bodies at a young age. You couple that with condemnation from (most) church clergy and you get curious children. Then you combine that with broken marriages and a fight over material property, a society...

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thank yoiu: thank you. i wrote in a generalization to allow men, women, boys, girls, whoever to connect with. some are too scared, timid, ashamed, embarrassed to admit it's happened, but maybe this will give them the courage to stick up for themselves, fight back, and realize it's not their fault. by doing so, it may put the rapists behind bars or may they face the death penality, and then the rest of us can...

Karyn, I certainly can: Karyn, I certainly can empathize with the weight of passion expressed in this poem. It is not an easy thing to place your feelings aside when we see horrific crimes such as are acted out daily in our society. I was raped several times as a minor child, and eventually had to come to grips with this truth about our society. I went through the rigorous process of exposure therapy, and found it to be...

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thanks: thanks. you're sweet.

Oh that's all it is? Well: Oh that's all it is? Well thanks for explaining it. I thpight it was something where you just couldn't think of anything to write aboit. Oh I get that all the time. Thank goodness for computers easy to erase!! ...

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thanks: thanks nightlight. this was harder, more challenging write, but i pulled it off anyway. 

And the part about: And the part about "intertwined blood brothers" speaks of the reasons why, because that in itself... a delusion. Flesh and blood turn to ashes... what is real is what is, not what others "think"is, which includes the poet, or of whom the poet speaks. Very very sad, but true. So many delusions and false beliefs strewn from gluteal folds that somehow grow....tongues. .....

If I made a living at this, I: If I made a living at this, I don't think I would ever have writer's block. Idk...maybe I would, but as you can you see.. I have too much to say already!! Lmao... ......

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thanks: thanks for all the feedback. 

Poetic_Eyes (not verified) commented on:

thank you: thank you nightlight for your comments. that sounds like a poem in itself and you should add it/title it. 

Much honoured Respected Poetic_Eyes...Thousand bows!!: Much honoured Respected Poetic_Eyes...Thousand bows!!   Faceless-yet-on-the-face-of-the-earth Showin mah face shall be a disgrace Mah face  is not a painters canvas Where artists paint lovely  faces.Alas!! What mah writes is mostly gas We'll meet doomsday at Sunday Mass In the Big Church made of pretty glass   (Glass concept is nightlight's) Stars shall shine in day moon also...

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thanks: thanks nightlight. hugs.

Lovely! I love the expression: Lovely! I love the expression about how the poems come to be. It is often like picking a bouquet of flowers from one's mind. The words that we read become merged with our inner thoughts and the picture becomes one we see as complete. We become weaved into tapestry through that process of creation. ....

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nicely done: nicely done bishu and nightline

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thanks: thanks bishu. I'm not that good music and don't ask me to play, but I enjoy music a lot, appreciate those who "own" it, and can write about it.

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that would make: that would make an excellent poem.

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thanks: thanks for the tree. it's beautifully artistic and symbolic.

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Dove Melody: