thank you: thank you for your feedback. i have been writing seasonal poems with a few others along the way. holidays have a way of lighting my candle whick muse. it's good to get into the spirit of it and also remember how we got here, the meaning behind it, and carrying on it's tradition.
What a lovely seasonal:
What a lovely seasonal poem. Loved your poem. Yes I believe in the spirit of giving and receiving gifts at Christmas, so of course I believe in Santa Claus.
thanks: the chidlren are a big part of the holiday. they're who we're trying to show the gift of giving, the story behind the holiday, and carry on the christmas legency.
Nightlight: nightlight...thank you for such a thought provoking response. i like to try to remind people why we're celebrating and part of being American is the ability to let our flags of religion fly. hugs.
I always love poems that: I always love poems that center around wise human beings of the past who walked the earth in virtues that stand the test of time. There have been many. Some have had entire "kingdoms and political views of judgement" based upon them. Whether they asked for this to be or not to be is most times left up to those who they leave behind, along with a plethora of additions from the depth of humanity's...
thanks: thanks. i wanted something light and fun and a kissing booth is just that. it's not overly sensual, but a kiss on a cheek. simple and sweet is what i was aiming for. you picked up on it. hugs ashley. i'm not that great of a speller. i count on abc check and i have a site i use to help me with my rhyming.
:) oh eyes!: :) that was so much fun! preccious emotions sold at kissing boths...I just love viewing poetry like that! I have often said I am an emotional prostetute! (and poor speller)
Pretty yet profound Respected PEyes: Pretty yet profound Respected PEyes... specially "horizons of perception" which "change with the direction of the wind" I'll learn someday........Almost broke mah molars chewing dis one.
This is truly Karen one of the most beautiful poems of yours: that I have read. kudos to you Madame Poet.............sincerely, a consumer and fan, Melissa
thank you: thank you dear smoothie. i'm so glad you like it. it was very challenging to write. i'm working on another one, but it has to be tweaked/amended before i add it.
Truly delightful read Respected Mm Poetic_eyes: Truly delightful read Respected Mm Poetic_eyes.Specially for you a quotation from "Humpty Dumpty" by Charles Lutwidge Dodgson.One of my alltime favourites
'Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy were the boregroves,
And the mome raths outgrabe.
thanks: thank you. as one of my favorite poetess' of this site, along with dove, nightlight it means more coming with someone with so much talent, personality, and creativity. huge hugs sis
Dear Ms Poetic,
Your petals: Dear Ms Poetic,
Your petals so fine,
Their taste upon my lips,
Bring the essence of "divine",
I wonder of the beauty,
Your sweet mind does make,
The hunger for such divinity....
(I think I'll go have some chocolate cake!)
Absolutely luscious dear "real eyes". ♥♥
More more!! :-)
...
People will come, And people: People will come,
And people will go,
Luck is the same.
Why??
We don't know.
Some friendships start easily,
Always there in the heart,
Some people can seem distant,
And drain energy from the start,
But one thing is for sure,
Lovely Poetic_Eyes,
Love and friendship can also
Be sinister in disguise,
So when someone ignores you,
Acts as if they don't care,
Know that sometimes there's angels...
Brine in a glass bottle: Brine in a glass bottle at mid sea
Corroding the parched lips and gullet
Was happy as happy could be
Dreaming of the cakes and chocs
While dodging the venomy snakes
Grappling with the murderous crocs
Shore Ahoy !!! a lone coconut tree
Soft pulpy sweet slushy kernel
The nectary sweet coconut water
Indeed the perfect thanksgiving
Hence even at sea he's not lamenting