Cupid's Miss

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Cupid's Miss

Karyn Indursky

 

Shall I compare thy feelings to roses?

Thou art more vulnerable and tender.

 

Like a fragile petal diction touches

thou heart with a gentle caress on skin

as rejection finds breaking hearts to clutch,

but finding friend support a little thin.

 

Blossoming buds of opportunities dry

moistened eyes and finding green stemmed strength

nestling in rouge connections trying

helping thou persevere and shorten hug length.

 

Growing out of fertilized brown ground roots

buds of renewed beauty takes a rose stand

for captivating internal faith boots

one day cupid will shoot his arrow grand.

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a.griffiths57's picture

    Your sonnet is

 

 

Your sonnet is beautifully crafted and worded, loved the rhyming too.


 

 

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Poetic_Eyes's picture

thank you

thank you.