Anonymous
Cupid's Miss
Karyn Indursky
Shall I compare thy feelings to roses?
Thou art more vulnerable and tender.
Like a fragile petal diction touches
thou heart with a gentle caress on skin
as rejection finds breaking hearts to clutch,
but finding friend support a little thin.
Blossoming buds of opportunities dry
moistened eyes and finding green stemmed strength
nestling in rouge connections trying
helping thou persevere and shorten hug length.
Growing out of fertilized brown ground roots
buds of renewed beauty takes a rose stand
for captivating internal faith boots
one day cupid will shoot his arrow grand.
Your sonnet is
Your sonnet is beautifully crafted and worded, loved the rhyming too.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
thank you
thank you.