Clearing the deck and: Clearing the deck and clearing the sinuses!! Ah-ah-ah.....chooooooo!!! Hey matey, "blow blow blow the man down"?
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thanks: thanks. you've been inspiring me a lot lately. i noticed you wrote limericks and thought i'd give it a try. i only could get so far until i was stuck. luckily dove's a very helpful, dear, sweet friend and helped me with the format of it. couldn't have done it without her.
bishu: i'm not thinking of where i'm going or who i'm seeing. i'm just writing about the holiday and trying to see the best in it, even the chaotic moments and if i can get a laugh at the sight of the animals playing tag that would be a bonus. i wanted to share part of my sense of humor in this piece.
Wowey !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!: Wowey !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Made me make a somersault. mah boat almost capsized.Lovely fond rememberance of SS & D one a feather & the other a winged angel-in-disguise......~~~~~~ play the tunes which will resonate forever in the minds of poets in bloom and poets-in-the-bud
Nice one Respected P_Eyes but............: Nice one Respected P_Eyes but............I , oh well... can't attend !! in any case who invited me? I'm unwelcome!!!!! I sometimes forget that I'm on the sea not on land.Landlubbers have so many dreams ,plans,ideas......Me is content lookin at the sea surface like the changing situations men/women have to face.They get over it sooner or later.Me & mah big mouth.What am I doing in this arena...
Sailors are not allowed to shed tears Respected P_Eyes!!: Sailors are not allowed to shed tears Respected P_Eyes!! I've shed enough already so I sail on the salty sea where all that there is brine.I'm overwhelmed.
Karyn Indursky me has shed enough tears already
So now I 'm sailing on the salty seas facing sun & storm
The humble tears now shed silently ,, no witnesses
mingle with the primordial sea whose breeze oft caresses
thanks: thanks. i really enjoyed writing this with you. i like writring on my own, but i like writing collabrations too. a little bit of you with a mix of me and we have a wonderful piece of poetry. hugs.
thanks: sonnet's have a few rules: 14 lines, abab, cdcd, efef, gg and 10 meter per line. Although you can switch it to ab cdcd efef ghgh. It's challenging to write a sonnet, but well worth it. I like mixing a little bit of modern with a splash of Old English. My poems show that versility. It's the people who truly enjoy reading, writing, exploring and learning poetry...the true fans...that encourage us...
This is sometimes what: This is sometimes what entertainers abhor the most. No doubt, a negative part of the accomplishment. (demands from fans and producers..lawyers, etc.) The flow is nice and steady with this peice.
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thank you: thank you dearest smoothie. if it wasn't for you and dove challenging and teaching me how to write sonnet I wouldn't be any write them. Thanks for your help and inspiration.