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That's right, Karyn!!  You go: That's right, Karyn!!  You go girl! (Funny one because you don't usually use words like 'crap', so the inflection it places on this is huge! LOL) .........................................

Yes...a way to question the: Yes...a way to question the self through others' perspective. I totally get it. ...................

Yup..very true. and if you: Yup..very true. and if you aren't disable, gay, of a minority, or a genius---you can really forget it. Take from one who has lived it and found a way to be joyful despite it all. Life is tough. Success is learning how to accept that, and be happy.Bold, honest, write---but then most of yours are. ....................

It most certainly is... I: It most certainly is... I love this one. 'Gut level honesty'. ~peace~ ................

Very "Karyn Indursky' here...: Very "Karyn Indursky' here... lovely, Karyn. ~blessings to you~ ..............

Fake friendships always fail : Fake friendships always fail  . So true Poetic_eyes. "So many friends I have" people boast now-a-days. But are they really friends ? I don't think so. They just talk & frolic to pass time . Really Really difficult to find a true friend in 2013.Selfish and craving for something is fatalistic yet "realistic" Sorry for blabbering. You caught me in your "reading trap" and "thinking snare"

"a friend is someone who sees: "a friend is someone who sees you as the subject of your own life, and not as an object to be used in theirs"~lightsun paul peaceweaver~   i love this karyn...all very true.

the trees are: the trees are diseased...lol (somebody on here has a name that said so)   Nice poem, Karyn. ~peace~   .........................

I totally get what ypur: I totally get what ypur saying about sometimes the wound is still too fresh, but isnt that when our work is the best? Dont get me wrong i love your pieces but would love for you to just give it to us straight in the future. Dont hide behind your words, embarce the rawness of saying exaclty what mean sometimes. Itay cathartic. Feel free to read and critique any of my work...i love constructive...

i enjoyed this: i enjoyed this read. ...............

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I tend to do both, though I: I tend to do both, though I try to portray emotions at times using the imagery... to give a bit of insight and "reality", replacement organ was about pretending to care and have a heart, when truly they were cold, inaffectionate, self serving in hindsight... A lot of my poems are "journals" which is why I sometimes protect myself behind the imagery and metaphors... because being honest to a...

Nice! ...........: Nice! ...........

And don't be flirtin' with me: And don't be flirtin' with me either, cause ain't falling for that...be real.. (LOL)..Nice write~~!! ~peace~ ......................

Nice, Karen. Always, just: Nice, Karyn. Always, just really nice. ~peace~ (da*n! i just noticed i keep spelling your name wrong! i apologize for that, honey!!) .............

Lets fly! ;) hugss lovely: Lets fly! ;) hugss lovely verse! 

HUGSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!: HUGSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! ;) lovely and true! 

lovely... as always.: lovely... as always. ~peace~ ...............

I know, I'm just saying that: I know, I'm just saying that it sounds so beautiful it's a shame to pluck it ;) I loved. The beautiful s description! Hugss 

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ssmoothie...: ssmoothie....you have a different interpretation. she's watching her favorite flower grow, tracing her fingertips over the petals in love of how the beauty/wonder of how a seed can turn into such a beautiful flower, and she's plucking the flower not to kill it, but to cherish it, treasure it, share it's beauty, and in my mind she takes a photo to preserve it forever as it etches a memory in her...

what a serene image.... i: what a serene image.... i used to do this when i lived near a creek! ~peace~ .......................

Ouch! Plucked so young while: Ouch! Plucked so young while she had so much to give! Could've out her in a flower pot! ;) luscious imagery! Well done I enjoyed! Hugss 

So many of your poems are: So many of your poems are like enigmas wrapped in mazes...i took this poem to be about abortion with the line "replacement organ where u bleed and have none". I enjoy the ambiguity your poems possess, but would love for u to lose some imagery and Replace it with some reality. Readers don't always want to try to figure out what ur words are about. You have such talent, but dont overabuse it.......

I think I just fell I: I think I just fell I love!!??

this poem leaves with a very: this poem leaves with a very eerie feeling, as if the writer is feeling completely powerless in the face of something overwhelming...perhaps even tragedy of some kind. The small print is a fantastic addition, as it enhances the overall feeling of being very small in the midst of this overpowering trial of life. good work, mardigan.   ..............................