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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: the poet's barren tale by redbrick 34 weeks 6 days ago
Very enjoyable. Like a time: Very enjoyable. Like a time machine, the poem transported me to that bardic setting.
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redbrick commented on: Easter Sunday Night, April 14th, About 10:00PM Local Time by S74rw4rd-13d 34 weeks 6 days ago
  Your poem, “Easter Sunday:   Your poem, “Easter Sunday Night, April 14th”, was a starlit coming-of-age, a moment gently torn between legacy and longing, tradition and selfhood. I responded with a poem titled “To the One Who Watches the Stars,” written in a quiet, affirming tone of. It speaks to choosing one’s path under the vast permission of the cosmos, of the night that feels wide open—for more poems like that one, more courage stitched into starlight, more quiet acts of truth spoken beneath traditions too heavy to carry. You’ve got something rare in the way you invite these voices from shadowed rooms and Easter skies alike.
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redbrick commented on: Mercator by redbrick 34 weeks 6 days ago
more cheers   : more cheers   
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redbrick commented on: totum factotum by redbrick 34 weeks 6 days ago
cheers : cheers
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SSmoothie commented on: The essence in 4 lines by SSmoothie 34 weeks 6 days ago
Wow what a beautiful and: Wow what a beautiful and talented response laid perfectly poetically with resounding profundity! Many thanks blessings ss
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Pungus commented on: Mercator by redbrick 35 weeks 23 hours ago
More goosebumbs: More goosebumbs
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Pungus commented on: totum factotum by redbrick 35 weeks 23 hours ago
Goosebumps: Goosebumps
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Teytonon commented on: The 40th Anniversary Of Chef Boyardee's Death by randyjohnson 35 weeks 1 day ago
Thanks for bringing attention..: Thanks for bringing attention to this sad occasion  We shouldn't be mourning, should have a celebration  We should celebrate his life, the rises and the falls Many are overcome with grief, even the meat bawls  We must realize, when you're talking chefs, he's the master Chef Boyardee, dead 40 years, that's all in the pasta He worked to attain his dream, never gave up on his plan To sell, God rest his soul, spaghetti & meatballs in a can    
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rachel commented on: The Fire-Mage by rachel 35 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you! My own: Thank you! My own interpretation of the character and his story is twofold: I think he either survived the apocalypse by shielding himself with his fire magic, or else he inadvertently caused it-- either way, he is alone and filled with terror and regret. I suppose, though, there is a third interpretation, too: that his baptism by fire is what made him a fire mage. In any case, he is a wretched creature-- my favorite kind!
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redbrick commented on: Maginot by redbrick 35 weeks 1 day ago
Probably, either as a ruin or: Probably, either as a ruin or a historical park. 
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Untitled 21 by rachel 35 weeks 1 day ago
Excellent, and very poetic,: Excellent, and very poetic, analysis!
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Teytonon commented on: Maginot by redbrick 35 weeks 1 day ago
This is as good..: This is as good as I've seen of your work, which is always top level. That picture is fascinating. Upon first glance, I thought it was an ad for a new condo in Brooklyn. Does it still exist?
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uninvited_1 commented on: crazy world by uninvited_1 35 weeks 1 day ago
I love and  appreciate your: I love and  appreciate your feedback on this one. Such a great breakdown through another reader's eyes. I'm so glad you took the the not only to read this, but to give such a well versed response. It truly means a lot. Thank you redbrick
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uninvited_1 commented on: Anthem of the Broken Hearted by uninvited_1 35 weeks 1 day ago
Heck yeah! : Heck yeah!
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redbrick commented on: Fred & Mildred - a misunderstanding by Teytonon 35 weeks 2 days ago
Some Fred needs a hearing aid: Some Fred needs a hearing aid and take his mind out of the gutter it seems, a truly fun read. But there is also some underlying truths running beneath the surface there, or so it would seem.
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