I was a brand new toy
You played with,
Innocently
But played with
Excessively,
Till you got bored.
It was so sudden,
Never saw it coming.
And now I can barely see you,
Dust over my eyes
But what little I see of you,
Is so much more
Than you see of me — Never noticed,
Never more a part of your world.
I remember when it started
Coming apart,
Now I don't even get
That little from you, anymore -
To be covered in your dirty clothes.
Today, I'm relegated
To that spot you kicked me,
Accidentally,
But with finality.
You didn't even notice
I ended up under the dresser,
I ended up here.
So suddenly things changed,
So suddenly they can end..
I was a brand new toy
You played with,
Innocently
But played with
Excessively
Till you got bored
It was so sudden -
How we played,
How we played
Just the night before -
It was so sudden,
I never saw it coming.
Can I crawl out of here?
I hope you don’t mind..
I hope you don't mind
Don't wish to be rude
Have a comment on your poem
Which I hope you'll include
Your point is not lost
How it comes across
What you tried to impart
It touches my heart
This poem takes me back
When I was a child
A poor family, though money we'd lack
My mom and dad tried to see that I smiled
When I was a boy, it still brought me joy
When for my birthday, instead of a toy
A card saying 'You know our love for you is deeply-rooted
Here are some batteries, toy not included'
I never mind when you grace
I never mind when you grace my writing with a comment, my friend.
The love behind all things is what makes them meaningful. Thank you for sharing from your life, in your humor-laden style, as well.
I have experienced a similar
I have experienced a similar situation. It haunted me for years. Your poem describes it very well.
Starward
I hope it doesn't haunt you,
I hope it doesn't haunt you, anymore, my friend. Thank you for reading and sharing how The Dusty Trinket connects with you.
Thank you for the reply. It
Thank you for the reply. It does not now haunt me; it ran out of steam in the mid-nineties. But the poem definitely reminded me of its effects.
Starward
You're welcome - I"m glad to
You're welcome - I"m glad to hear that it's now long ago. Thank you, again, for sharing that with me.