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ramonathompsont commented on: That Man Now In The White House by S74rw4rd-13d 34 weeks 5 days ago
wow how do you really feel?: wow how do you really feel? lol very powerful words
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Our Hero, Trump! by ramonathompsont 34 weeks 5 days ago
The eighth line:  do you . .: The eighth line:  do you . . . can you even possibly . . . think that man who has usurped the Presidency is greater than even Abraham Lincoln?
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redbrick commented on: PEPPER GLASS DREAMS by georgeschaefer 34 weeks 5 days ago
You and me both! And as: You and me both! And as scratch paper we used legal size yellow ruled pads. 
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georgeschaefer commented on: PEPPER GLASS DREAMS by georgeschaefer 34 weeks 5 days ago
filling up those old spiral: filling up those old spiral notebooks was something I lived for back in the day
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redbrick commented on: Blue-Collar Poetry by Pungus 34 weeks 5 days ago
Everything is not about: Everything is not about intellect but probably more about heart and passion in fusion with smarts of sorts
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redbrick commented on: to one watching stars by redbrick 34 weeks 5 days ago
Most glad that words have: Most glad that words have allowed articulation
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Pungus commented on: Blue-Collar Poetry by Pungus 34 weeks 5 days ago
However my first fear would: However my first fear would be that I couldn't keep up, due to the vast gap I have of intellectual inferiority in comparing where we stand on the food-chain, and thereby either foolishly embarress myself like usual or reluctantly cower under the recognition of my surfaced stupidity. That being said, I suppose as a concept to conquer these qualms I can consider myself a student of sorts. The choice is yours.
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redbrick commented on: Blue-Collar Poetry by Pungus 34 weeks 5 days ago
That was fun! Yes, we should: That was fun! Yes, we should do that again
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Easter Sunday Night, April 14th, About 10:00PM Local Time by S74rw4rd-13d 34 weeks 5 days ago
It does indeed!: It does indeed!
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Pungus commented on: Blue-Collar Poetry by Pungus 34 weeks 5 days ago
Wow, if someone told me I: Wow, if someone told me I would receive a comment at all on this little widget, let alone one as utterly spectacular as that, I wouldn't have believed it. But wow, thank you, that was a very nice way to begin this expectant night of no-sleep. Perhaps we can see how long our patterned chat may last, like last time?
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redbrick commented on: Easter Sunday Night, April 14th, About 10:00PM Local Time by S74rw4rd-13d 34 weeks 6 days ago
Here is the link to that: Here is the link to that response poem: https://postpoems.org/authors/redbrick/poem/1127489 Hope it does justice
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: Easter Sunday Night, April 14th, About 10:00PM Local Time by S74rw4rd-13d 34 weeks 6 days ago
Coming from a Poet whose: Coming from a Poet whose poems I supremely admire, this is one of the finest comments I have ever received here.  I am humbled before the presence of your kind words, and I am very, very grateful for them.
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redbrick commented on: Blue-Collar Poetry by Pungus 34 weeks 6 days ago
Short, unvarnished, and wry;: Short, unvarnished, and wry; much like a quick word shared between coworkers at the end of a grueling shift. It distills a working-class voice down to its bluntest truth: “Alls I wanna do... is / Crack open a couple-a / Cold ones.” The poetic speaker owns their exhaustion and doesn’t dress it up. In fact, the closing line: “So pardon poor quality” is a cheeky nod to the poem’s own rough edges, as if the poem apologizes for being a poem at all; that’s where the power lives. This poem doesn't strive for perfection; it leans into the sweat, the slang, and the syntax of the shift floor. It says, “Here I am, tired and tipsy, and this is still art.” There’s a subtle defiance in that simplicity. The poetic speaker may be too beat down to wax lyrical, but the act of writing (even poorly) is a kind of claim to space, to voice, to survival. Labourers of the world, Unite!  
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: to one watching stars by redbrick 34 weeks 6 days ago
To say this made my breath: To say this made my breath hitch in my throat as I read it would be an understatement. To say that your imagery and phrasing reach my soul through the visceral level of the gut would not be saying enough. Thus, with the words of any comment from me proven impotent by the enormous verbal power of this stellar poem, I will simply rejoice in its presence with gladly awe-stricken silence.
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redbrick commented on: the poet's barren tale by redbrick 34 weeks 6 days ago
Yes indeed, much like a Time: Yes indeed, much like a Time Machine, that would be so fascinating
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