The eighth line: do you . .: The eighth line: do you . . . can you even possibly . . . think that man who has usurped the Presidency is greater than even Abraham Lincoln?
However my first fear would: However my first fear would be that I couldn't keep up, due to the vast gap I have of intellectual inferiority in comparing where we stand on the food-chain, and thereby either foolishly embarress myself like usual or reluctantly cower under the recognition of my surfaced stupidity. That being said, I suppose as a concept to conquer these qualms I can consider myself a student of sorts. The choice is yours.
Wow, if someone told me I: Wow, if someone told me I would receive a comment at all on this little widget, let alone one as utterly spectacular as that, I wouldn't have believed it. But wow, thank you, that was a very nice way to begin this expectant night of no-sleep. Perhaps we can see how long our patterned chat may last, like last time?
Coming from a Poet whose: Coming from a Poet whose poems I supremely admire, this is one of the finest comments I have ever received here. I am humbled before the presence of your kind words, and I am very, very grateful for them.
Short, unvarnished, and wry;: Short, unvarnished, and wry; much like a quick word shared between coworkers at the end of a grueling shift.
It distills a working-class voice down to its bluntest truth: “Alls I wanna do... is / Crack open a couple-a / Cold ones.”
The poetic speaker owns their exhaustion and doesn’t dress it up. In fact, the closing line: “So pardon poor quality”
is a cheeky nod to the poem’s own rough edges, as if the poem apologizes for being a poem at all; that’s where the power lives.
This poem doesn't strive for perfection; it leans into the sweat, the slang, and the syntax of the shift floor.
It says, “Here I am, tired and tipsy, and this is still art.” There’s a subtle defiance in that simplicity.
The poetic speaker may be too beat down to wax lyrical, but the act of writing (even poorly) is a kind of claim to space, to voice, to survival.
Labourers of the world, Unite!
To say this made my breath: To say this made my breath hitch in my throat as I read it would be an understatement.
To say that your imagery and phrasing reach my soul through the visceral level of the gut would not be saying enough.
Thus, with the words of any comment from me proven impotent by the enormous verbal power of this stellar poem, I will simply rejoice in its presence with gladly awe-stricken silence.