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Pungus commented on: the old home by redbrick 1 year 9 weeks ago
You are amazing: In following a recent reading-writing spree, and already exhausted from it, I am amazed at your ability to forge forth. Your sword suits you well.
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Angelhavingfun commented on: Excuses by LornaRJ 1 year 9 weeks ago
I love this: I love this
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Angelhavingfun commented on: The Ones Who Stay in the Rain by Savvart 1 year 9 weeks ago
This is beautiful : This is beautiful 
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alex73 commented on: The Hole by alex73 1 year 9 weeks ago
Thank you! I have always felt: Thank you! I have always felt poems are deep thoughts and feelings that are written no matter how it comes out.
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redbrick commented on: Dear Tommy by Pungus 1 year 9 weeks ago
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redbrick commented on: The Hole by alex73 1 year 9 weeks ago
Moving and relatable : Moving and relatable 
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elliot_jordan2003 commented on: "Shadows of You" by elliot_jordan2003 1 year 9 weeks ago
Thanks for the kind remarks. : Thanks for the kind remarks.  Curious as to what you imagin for the video. I use Mureka AI music app to make music and it created this   https://www.mureka.ai/song-detail/MA3VhqhTs7KA7xViEZKFxc?is_from_share=1...
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Pungus commented on: townhouse days by redbrick 1 year 9 weeks ago
As I Lay Dying vibes much?: As I Lay Dying vibes much?
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Pungus commented on: Dear Tommy by Pungus 1 year 9 weeks ago
Beautiful.: Beautiful.
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redbrick commented on: when the ice found them by redbrick 1 year 9 weeks ago
Sometimes finding myself: Sometimes finding myself hardput in the face of such exponential praise as it was a rare experience growing up. But I am truly grateful. And also learning to flow in the way of things. So, thank you so much Januarily/StarSpared. 
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StarSpared commented on: when the ice found them by redbrick 1 year 9 weeks ago
Poetic quality to the utmost,: Poetic quality to the utmost, the Nth, possible degree.
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StarSpared commented on: Tonight They Make Love by ramonathompsont 1 year 9 weeks ago
In lovers': In lovers' gravitation/attraction to each other, and in the mutual heat produced by their bodies when naked together, they are most like our ancestors, the stars.
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redbrick commented on: just a single word by redbrick 1 year 9 weeks ago
  A meditation on the erosion:   A meditation on the erosion of meaningful discourse, Just a Single Word moves from the shifting tides of a once‑vibrant exchange to the guarded quiet of those who remember its power. Through coastal imagery and the weight of repetition, it captures the ache of watching language lose its command and the quiet defiance of holding onto its memory.
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redbrick commented on: Shelf of Books by djtj 1 year 9 weeks ago
'Just books!' now there is a: 'Just books!' now there is a novel idea these days! We still have to reclaim the nomenclature- they're basically sold as multipurpose 'storage units' for years now... and advertised as useful as bookshelves optionally.
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redbrick commented on: Dear Tommy by Pungus 1 year 9 weeks ago
Dear Topsyturnsylad, the: Dear Topsyturnsylad, the moon’s still lounging in its bus‑seat dreams while Cthulhu hums Bob Marley to a row of flamingos crunching popcorn like it’s the end of the world and the start of the circus. The court’s handed me a fistful of stardust as penance, Godzilla’s tapping his foot for that long‑overdue mixtape, and somewhere between puff and poof I’ve slipped behind the vending machine, grinning in the shoelace‑shadows. The birds are still shrieking, the planet’s still a poisonous turtle, and yet here we are, two cosmic mischief‑makers swapping postcards from the edge of the dream.   The moon leans back in its bus‑seat throne, eyes half‑closed, humming a reggae lullaby while Cthulhu, all tentacles and tenderness, feeds popcorn to flamingos in the front row.   The court’s verdict is a jar of stardust, spilling through my fingers as Godzilla waits, tail swaying to a beat only he can hear, still wanting that mixtape you swore you’d send.   I haven’t vanished — not really. I’m just folded into the vending‑machine shadows, shoelaces tangled in the pulse of the night, watching the poisonous turtle planet spin and thinking how lucky it is to have another dreamer out here on the edge.    
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