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Teytonon commented on: Remember by prboggs 43 weeks 3 days ago
I enjoyed reading your commentary..: I enjoyed reading your commentary Your advice is anything but rotten Unfortunately for me, you see Less than five minutes later, it was forgotten   I have problems with my memory Did anything important happen in December? I'm bad at remembering to forget But good at forgetting to remember   By the way, I thought you might find this interesting. I was looking at your name. If you take your name and scramble the letters, you can come up with the following:  PAULETTA RUBY BOGGS = G, GOT BLUS? U BETA PRAY!
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prboggs commented on: Remember by prboggs 43 weeks 3 days ago
I am an ordained Metropolitan: I am an ordained Metropolitan Bishop, and I am here to share positive, uplifting thoughts and energy with honest, decent people 
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beaconzbard commented on: FOR I AM TRULY FORGIVEN by beaconzbard 43 weeks 3 days ago
It's now on YouTube: You can now watch/hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/mbjNTyxnR6E
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S74rw4rd commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Neaniskos And Ahitophel, Officer Of The Temple Guard by S74RW4RD 43 weeks 4 days ago
Thank you so much for: Thank you so much for commenting on this, and for understanding what I was trying to accomplish.  This story came to me in a flurry last night, and I was up from three in the morning to almost six trying to put it together.  I decided not to cite Biblical sources, as such notes might disrupt either the flow of the poem, or collide with its effect if the reader looked through any attached notes.   Your acceptance, as you know, gives the poem a full validation and I will keep it as is, without further adjustment or alteration.  Thanks again for taking the time to read it and comment.
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patriciajj commented on: @ 27.055 MHz: Ad Astra; Neaniskos And Ahitophel, Officer Of The Temple Guard by S74RW4RD 43 weeks 4 days ago
Your tightly packed epics are: Your tightly packed epics are always a joy to dive into. Brief and swift compared to a short story, this poem is so emotionally intense and historically intriguing that it could be a masterclass in compressed drama with a crucial, underlying message.     Some might believe that all captivating ideas for stories woven around Biblical events have been exhausted, but leave it to you to discover an opening for a hard-hitting, deeply satisfying scene; one that fits so gracefully into the timeline that it feels authentic, compelling, very much like the narration in the excellent story you pay homage to.   While some short stories take several paragraphs to construct a believable and engaging character, I felt like I knew the genial, multidimensional, Divinely blessed yet adorably shy Neaniskos in a few lines.   But it wasn't the youth or fleeting physical attributes of the character that brought him to life, it was his soft and beautiful aura displayed in small actions such as gently touching the centurion's arm. The unforced, natural calm of one character acted as a foil for the understandable indignation of the other and together, it worked.   A deeply emotional and richly allusive micro story worthy of its monumental setting.  
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Wordman commented on: A Night On The Porch by Wordman 43 weeks 4 days ago
When words paint a picture: When words paint a picture that jostles a memory, either true or perceived, tears well, or smiles are born, and both the author and reader find the purpose of those words, their meaning, and their worth. Thank you Starward for finding such worth in my words, I appreciate your time and visit Sir.  
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beaconzbard commented on: ALL OF THIS GRIME, AND ALL THE RUST by beaconzbard 43 weeks 4 days ago
It's now on YouTube: You can now watch/hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/G4QlyA5lICc
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djtj commented on: BLONDE IN A MINI by georgeschaefer 43 weeks 5 days ago
Random events: Random happening make the most lasting impressions.  Debbie
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djtj commented on: Almost Entirely by djtj 43 weeks 5 days ago
Thank : Tahnk you for reading. This is a work in progress I already made some changes. There is nothing better thatn coffee aroma for memories. Thank you for reading and commenting. Check out the few changes I made just now.
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J-Called commented on: A Night On The Porch by Wordman 43 weeks 5 days ago
I am usually too verbose in: I am usually too verbose in many of my comments, but I must confess that this poem reaches me at such an elemental level that I do not have sufficient words to describe its impact upon me.  I selected this poem at what I thought was a random browse; but I do not now believe the browse was random, I believe it was directed.  I was led here, and I am mighty glad that I was.
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georgeschaefer commented on: Almost Entirely by djtj 43 weeks 6 days ago
It is funny how certain: It is funny how certain aromas and smells can trigger memories and inspire poetry
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Teytonon commented on: UNMITIGATED LIES by georgeschaefer 43 weeks 6 days ago
If I may add..: If I may add something to your title 'Unmitigated Lies' When it comes to Donald Trump Not only are his lies unmitigated As far as we know  I'm guessing 95% of them remain unlitigated.  
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Teytonon commented on: Paranoid Society by LittleLennonGurl 43 weeks 6 days ago
I agree with you 100%..: I agree with you 100%. We certainly are living in a paranoid society. I am definitely paranoid, but in a different way. I believe that people are out to do good things for me. 
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Teytonon commented on: Society Of The Soulless by LittleLennonGurl 43 weeks 6 days ago
If I were to..: If I were to take an egg Take it right after it's hatched And cook it, no joke Oh, I could eat the yolk Oh no! Don't you see how they matched?   You know what I'm referring to? Is your head now in a whirl? I'll be your 'Yolk, oh? Oh no! boy' If you'll be my 'littlelennongurl'  
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Teytonon commented on: EMBRACE IT! by wisdomscry 43 weeks 6 days ago
Though your New Years..: Though your New Years wish is somewhat belated It is very much appreciated. The same to you and your family. By the way, regarding your online name  Bob Marley said 'No woman, no cry' You're 'wisdomscry' Does that mean you believe 'No wisdom, no cry'?I must disagree. I feel the opposite. Still enjoy reading your poems though. 
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