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redbrick commented on: The Hole by alex73 47 weeks 4 days ago
Moving and relatable : Moving and relatable 
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elliot_jordan2003 commented on: "Shadows of You" by elliot_jordan2003 47 weeks 4 days ago
Thanks for the kind remarks. : Thanks for the kind remarks.  Curious as to what you imagin for the video. I use Mureka AI music app to make music and it created this   https://www.mureka.ai/song-detail/MA3VhqhTs7KA7xViEZKFxc?is_from_share=1...
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Pungus commented on: townhouse days by redbrick 47 weeks 4 days ago
As I Lay Dying vibes much?: As I Lay Dying vibes much?
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Pungus commented on: Dear Tommy by Pungus 47 weeks 4 days ago
Beautiful.: Beautiful.
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redbrick commented on: when the ice found them by redbrick 47 weeks 5 days ago
Sometimes finding myself: Sometimes finding myself hardput in the face of such exponential praise as it was a rare experience growing up. But I am truly grateful. And also learning to flow in the way of things. So, thank you so much Januarily/StarSpared. 
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StarSpared commented on: when the ice found them by redbrick 47 weeks 5 days ago
Poetic quality to the utmost,: Poetic quality to the utmost, the Nth, possible degree.
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StarSpared commented on: Tonight They Make Love by ramonathompsont 47 weeks 5 days ago
In lovers': In lovers' gravitation/attraction to each other, and in the mutual heat produced by their bodies when naked together, they are most like our ancestors, the stars.
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redbrick commented on: just a single word by redbrick 47 weeks 6 days ago
  A meditation on the erosion:   A meditation on the erosion of meaningful discourse, Just a Single Word moves from the shifting tides of a once‑vibrant exchange to the guarded quiet of those who remember its power. Through coastal imagery and the weight of repetition, it captures the ache of watching language lose its command and the quiet defiance of holding onto its memory.
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redbrick commented on: Shelf of Books by djtj 47 weeks 6 days ago
'Just books!' now there is a: 'Just books!' now there is a novel idea these days! We still have to reclaim the nomenclature- they're basically sold as multipurpose 'storage units' for years now... and advertised as useful as bookshelves optionally.
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redbrick commented on: Dear Tommy by Pungus 47 weeks 6 days ago
Dear Topsyturnsylad, the: Dear Topsyturnsylad, the moon’s still lounging in its bus‑seat dreams while Cthulhu hums Bob Marley to a row of flamingos crunching popcorn like it’s the end of the world and the start of the circus. The court’s handed me a fistful of stardust as penance, Godzilla’s tapping his foot for that long‑overdue mixtape, and somewhere between puff and poof I’ve slipped behind the vending machine, grinning in the shoelace‑shadows. The birds are still shrieking, the planet’s still a poisonous turtle, and yet here we are, two cosmic mischief‑makers swapping postcards from the edge of the dream.   The moon leans back in its bus‑seat throne, eyes half‑closed, humming a reggae lullaby while Cthulhu, all tentacles and tenderness, feeds popcorn to flamingos in the front row.   The court’s verdict is a jar of stardust, spilling through my fingers as Godzilla waits, tail swaying to a beat only he can hear, still wanting that mixtape you swore you’d send.   I haven’t vanished — not really. I’m just folded into the vending‑machine shadows, shoelaces tangled in the pulse of the night, watching the poisonous turtle planet spin and thinking how lucky it is to have another dreamer out here on the edge.    
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Bellalibra commented on: As I ask… by orishaman 48 weeks 5 hours ago
Balance : A most poignant writing encompassing reciprocal love.  No ego. No judgement. Simple understanding of the hearts' needs.  l
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redbrick commented on: poems for money and no kicks for free... by redbrick 48 weeks 6 hours ago
Glad to bring some sunshine: Glad to bring some sunshine Tony!
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Teytonon commented on: poems for money and no kicks for free... by redbrick 48 weeks 11 hours ago
This is outstanding!..: This is outstanding! I loved it! 
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StarSpared commented on: + 9TH POEMS: Aubade, Spiritually Composed by Starward-Led 48 weeks 15 hours ago
Thank you for the high: Thank you for the high encouragement and validation in this comment!
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redbrick commented on: + 9TH POEMS: Aubade, Spiritually Composed by Starward-Led 48 weeks 15 hours ago
Far too many of us are: Far too many of us are focused on Moses' burning bush moment that it's too easy to overlook that we all have our individual and unique barefoot day before the LORD. This poem shows me that that all is not lost.
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