This excellent poem needs to: This excellent poem needs to be read by evey bullied kid in public or private schools. I wish such a poem had been available during my most difficult time---February 3rd, 1969 to June 7th, 1974.
"Gallery" has quite a ring to: "Gallery" has quite a ring to it and perhaps so due to the effect of Van Gogh and Co on my creative life curriculum and and journey.
This is very beautiful,: This is very beautiful, except for the word "betwixt," which violates the conversational tone. Ought to be "between." Otherwise, this exquisitely beautiful, especially the stanza that introduces the stars.
Except for the line about: Except for the line about "better balance" (better implies judgement and heteronormative prejudice), this is an exceptionally important poem. Admittedly, I do not care for most of your daily postings, but this is like a lilly in the garden, and I applaud your accomplishment.
It can be supposed that our: It can be supposed that our insanity is given some free range in the realm of poetics... licence and justice all rolled into one. more emojis, but limited on this site.
I simply cannot keep up, but: I simply cannot keep up, but am very glad this site has no thumbs up buttons or heart emojis, because your work deserves much, much more... PS I eagerly read everything you post