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This is an intro piece to my poetry performances. It's not quite done yet but I would really appreciate some feedback on how it is so far. What do you think?

So this is completely random. You don't even wanna know where the idea for this came from...

Universally Acclaimed on my Facebook account in what all my friends/fans on my Facebook have called it "My Best Poem Ever"

I wrote 3 parts of these, i spent my entire Senior Year getting to know this amazing girl that lived in Australia, recently moved to Robs town, Texas.
It was the most amazing experience I've ever had, i loved this girl with all my heart<3 This is for you Emily<3

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This poem is more of a child rhyme, its very pleasant.