Verbal verbatim of a vast and venomous mind

This is my verbal verbatim of a vast and venomous mind. You'll find it vividly vexing, yet viciously violent. So vacate your mind, leave your thoughts behind. Enjoy this vocal vacation as I express my vindication for this dictation. You see, I am a vagrant, a veteran of this vast and venomous world...

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This is an intro piece to my poetry performances. It's not quite done yet but I would really appreciate some feedback on how it is so far. What do you think?

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