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Write Butterfly

Karyn Indursky
 
Be a caterpillar
crawling upon my leaf page
to nibble and eat errors.
 
Be my caterpillar
growing with knowledge
until you spin your cocoon.
 
Spin your cocoon
with my stanzas
undergoing metamorphosis.
 
As your metamorphosis
turns you into a butterfly
write your flight.
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Inspired by nightlight and ssmoothie.

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©17 October 2013 - 1:58pm — Anonymous
24 October 2013 - 9:10pm — SSmoothie
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I love this! The last lines

I love this! The last lines are so cool too! Hugss 

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

25 October 2013 - 12:06pm — Poetic_Eyes (not verified)
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thanks

hugsss

23 October 2013 - 3:02pm — Beavis
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;-)

Simply beautiful!

24 October 2013 - 12:17pm — Poetic_Eyes (not verified)
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thanks

thanks sir beavis.

17 October 2013 - 3:08pm — nightlight1220
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I love it!! ♥♥♥ ... Feels

I love it!! ♥♥♥

...

Feels good to give back to those who inspire me greatly too.

YOU :-) you are a ☆★☆★☆★☆★!!!!

....

...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

18 October 2013 - 1:49pm — Poetic_Eyes (not verified)
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thanks

thanks nightlight

17 October 2013 - 2:12pm — bishu
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Respected Poetic_Eyes

Respected Poetic_Eyes.You put in  nucleii which true poets can use.Great !!!!!!! Hoping for more & more butterflies on the site weaving words .BTW you appear to be a nice person since you have written to have been inspired by Respected SSmoothie & Respected nightlight1220 both of whom I truly respect & rever.They are both booster rockets on this site & you now appear to be fuel.Hats off Respected Poetic_Eyes.~ Your pp friend Popped Eye~

©bishu 

 

17 October 2013 - 2:33pm — Poetic_Eyes (not verified)
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thanks

thanks. i respect them as well. they're both amazing poets and encourage, inspire, challenge me to keep writing and grow. i'm glad you enjoyed reading my poetry and took the time to leave feedback.