Anonymous
Dove's Flying Sonnet
Karyn Indursky
Shall I compare thou poetry to dove's flight?
Thou art more deft amongst the cotton clouds.
thy word flow flaps its wings with sheer delight.
thee muse pushes you until you are proud.
Poetic accessories dress up
lines with imagery beyond compare
when ruffled feathers get dunked in a cup
to make rhythmic meters with her poet care.
Stars come out in cosmic guiding the way
into night time atmosphere changing view
as transitional stanza's fly over bays
to make its way around the world to you.
As long as the sun has dove's poetic wings
her poetry will soar and lyrics sing.
thanks
thanks ssmoothie. hugs. i just wrote a new sonnet and added it. it's entitled, "Crown Us."
Love it it's perfectly
Love it it's perfectly dovely! Well done! Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Love the feedback
love the feedback dove and bishu. i wouldn't worry about her wings bishu she's an expert sonnet writer, amazing poet, and will meet a challenge. her poetic lyrics will leave the sun's rays in disbelief as she soars making her poetry spread near and far.
I love it!!! So expressive of
I love it!!! So expressive of the one and only "Dove" of Post Poems.
"Poetic accessories dress up
lines with imagery beyond compare
when ruffled feathers get dunked in a cup
to make rhythmic meters with her poet care."
^^^ "trademark D"
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
thanks
thanks nightlight. hugs.