Poetry Tidal Waves

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Poetry Tidal Waves

Karyn Indursky
 
Shall I compare thy muse to ocean tides?
Thou are more temperamental and free.

Like swimming in pools of a writer's pride
feeling tonalities wash over thee
thy pen's ink flows happily on its ride
as watcher's marvel at what they can see.
 
Currents of personality begin
flowing through words of delta deposits
as swift as surfers riding white crests in 
rhythms of stanzas leaving composites.
 
As long as the sun rises tomorrow
thy poetry will travel through morrow.
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nightlight1220's picture

Love this."Currents of

Love this."Currents of personality begin

flowing through words"

With that..good nite PP.

...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

Poetic_Eyes's picture

thanks

thanks nightlight. i worked very hard on that line and fumbled to come up with the rhyme to fit the sonnet format. definitely worth the time and effort. HUGs. good night dear friend