Poetry Tidal Waves
Karyn Indursky
Shall I compare thy muse to ocean tides?
Thou are more temperamental and free.
Like swimming in pools of a writer's pride
feeling tonalities wash over thee
thy pen's ink flows happily on its ride
as watcher's marvel at what they can see.
Currents of personality begin
flowing through words of delta deposits
as swift as surfers riding white crests in
rhythms of stanzas leaving composites.
As long as the sun rises tomorrow
thy poetry will travel through morrow.
Love this."Currents of
Love this."Currents of personality begin
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
thanks
thanks nightlight. i worked very hard on that line and fumbled to come up with the rhyme to fit the sonnet format. definitely worth the time and effort. HUGs. good night dear friend