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allets commented on: Where is this all taking place? by Anonymous 11 years 26 weeks ago
Syllables as notes/beats: I tend to drift off the pace a lot, this one has so much authentic rhythm, the meaning is secondary to the music - I listened to some rap recently - slim shady - it was an experience but I hung in there for about 10 riffs and then the lyrics turned to sex and I lost interest - be well ~~A~~
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allets commented on: Singing again .. improvisation by Anonymous 11 years 26 weeks ago
gotta post it: don't utube - I miss this one  ~~A~~
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Poetic_Eyes (not verified) commented on:
Missed Smiles by Anonymous 11 years 26 weeks ago
thanks: thanks smoothie. hugs.
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nightlight1220 commented on: Forced Into Abortion by Anonymous 11 years 26 weeks ago
oh how sad... I never thought: oh how sad... I never thought about it like this but I guess it does happen a lot!
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SSmoothie commented on: Rose Courtship by Anonymous 11 years 26 weeks ago
Here! Here! Total agreement!: Here! Here! Total agreement! Only it takes so long for a male to get to that point of realisation! lol! Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Depression's Eyes by Anonymous 11 years 26 weeks ago
Such a good description of it: Such a good description of it it makes me shudder... Well written! Hugss and more hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Missed Smiles by Anonymous 11 years 26 weeks ago
This is so sweet and warming: This is so sweet and warming to the soul. Beautifully done. Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Soul Searching Questionnaire by Anonymous 11 years 26 weeks ago
Wow, so philosophical! I'm: Wow, so philosophical! I'm loving it p! 
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SSmoothie commented on: Tauntingly Single by Anonymous 11 years 26 weeks ago
I sincerely hope your prayers: I sincerely hope your prayers are answered! You deserve e best!  Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Talk Is Cheap by Anonymous 11 years 26 weeks ago
How many times have I thought: How many times have I thought this in my life! Nicely done! 
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Poetic_Eyes (not verified) commented on:
Tauntingly Single by Anonymous 11 years 26 weeks ago
thanks: thanks. i have a bit of a hopeless romantic in me as well and sometimes it slips into my poetry. i do have a lot of poems, but i've slowed down on adding/sharing them. however, every so often i update. i'm glad you enjoyed my work. 
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Poetic_Eyes (not verified) commented on:
Soul Searching Questionnaire by Anonymous 11 years 26 weeks ago
thanks: thanks nightlight. i think everyone needs to do some soul searching from time to time. glad you enjoyed this piece.
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nightlight1220 commented on: Soul Searching Questionnaire by Anonymous 11 years 26 weeks ago
Soul searching...nice topic.: Soul searching...nice topic. I found it necessary for myself and do it daily...sometimes lots before important decisions. We all have different reasons for being born.
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nightlight1220 commented on: Tauntingly Single by Anonymous 11 years 26 weeks ago
Awww. This poem brings me a: Awww. This poem brings me a feeling of compassion for the writer. As always, nice work, but then I do love most everything you've written so far of what I've read. (you have a lot of poems!!)
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allets commented on: Descripture by Anonymous 11 years 26 weeks ago
Near Rhymes: work. Clarity works sometimes. ~~A~~
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allets commented on: Young wanderer by Anonymous 11 years 26 weeks ago
memories: sketched with sand? nice line ~A~
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allets commented on: Unmapped Decision by Anonymous 11 years 27 weeks ago
There's No Return: No, there isn't. ~~A~~
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allets commented on: Trial by Media by Anonymous 11 years 27 weeks ago
I Love How You ideate: I read you over and over because each time there is more there. like rag blotted paper...something to ponder - the world/civilization descends and ascends simultaneously - the dichotomy is filled with tensions I enjoy in a writer with their thumb on the pulse of our days - be well and please keep writing - you do it so well ~A~
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Mardigan (not verified) commented on:
Climbing Inside Perfection by Anonymous 11 years 27 weeks ago
Damn...you're like a master: Damn...you're like a master at imagery...Not to mention this piece is filled with emotion. Bravo, sir. 
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Mardigan (not verified) commented on:
The awoken heart of the devil himself by Anonymous 11 years 27 weeks ago
Appreciate it, glad ya'll: Appreciate it, glad ya'll enjoyed it :)
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Mardigan (not verified) commented on:
The awoken heart of the devil himself by Anonymous 11 years 27 weeks ago
Thank you!: Thank you!
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cmf commented on: The awoken heart of the devil himself by Anonymous 11 years 27 weeks ago
I really like this poem, I: I really like this poem, I like the darkness about it.
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Affirmation (not verified) commented on:
A fool in the palm of gods hand by Anonymous 11 years 27 weeks ago
The last two stanzas were: The last two stanzas were really great. Good imagery also.
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Affirmation (not verified) commented on:
The awoken heart of the devil himself by Anonymous 11 years 27 weeks ago
Perfect flow of words here.: Perfect flow of words here. really enjoyed this.
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impyshideout (not verified) commented on:
Monkeys by Anonymous 11 years 27 weeks ago
Yes, let's be friends. Sorry: Yes, let's be friends. Sorry I didn't ever see your comment until now. For some reason PP isn't sending me notifications. :/ Anyway, yes to fate! :)
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SSmoothie commented on: True Interest by Anonymous 11 years 27 weeks ago
Here here! Sing it sister!: Here here! Sing it sister! :D 
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nightlight1220 commented on: Fan Or Foe Of Poetry? by Anonymous 11 years 27 weeks ago
YES!! Which is also the: YES!! Which is also the beauty that sustains the lover of it!!
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Poetic_Eyes (not verified) commented on:
Fan Or Foe Of Poetry? by Anonymous 11 years 27 weeks ago
thanks: thanks roc.
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RoC commented on: Fan Or Foe Of Poetry? by Anonymous 11 years 27 weeks ago
Undoubtedly...: A Fan ;) Glad to see your work back where it belongs... once more gracing the postpages
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Daniie_Nicole (not verified) commented on:
What They Told Me by Anonymous 11 years 27 weeks ago
OhmyGosh its nice to meet: OhmyGosh its nice to meet random new people :3 I always thought I needed the support of my friends, with them just being there with me, to help me through my struggles. But I guess not right?
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Daniie_Nicole (not verified) commented on:
Untitled by Anonymous 11 years 27 weeks ago
Haha yeah I couldnt think of: Haha yeah I couldnt think of a title
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Daniie_Nicole (not verified) commented on:
Shut Down by Anonymous 11 years 27 weeks ago
Thank you. Over time Ive been: Thank you. Over time Ive been finding ways to try to keep calm during worst case scenarios. One of my teachers is actually trying to get me into meditation when she found out about me struggling. But yeah its really hard. Only time will heal these scars
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nightlight1220 commented on: Shut Down by Anonymous 11 years 28 weeks ago
It takes time and yearning to: It takes time and yearning to connect our physical existence to our soul, and especially so during adolescence I think. You are so much more than what you think you are. I do not think it would have changed who I am today had I known the power of meditation when I was a teenager, but I am sure it would not have been near as difficult.   http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fUS6YvucNo4&feature=...
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nightlight1220 commented on: Untitled by Anonymous 11 years 28 weeks ago
No title? :-)   : No title? :-)   
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nightlight1220 commented on: What They Told Me by Anonymous 11 years 28 weeks ago
You don't need them. You are: You don't need them. You are so much stronger. Just look at you reaching out in this poem. Do you know the strength that takes? Omg, I do not even know you and I am so proud to make even this online acquaintance!
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Poetic_Eyes (not verified) commented on:
Don't Take It Personally? by Anonymous 11 years 28 weeks ago
thanks: thanks for the feedback.
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ChryWizard commented on: Monkeys by Anonymous 11 years 28 weeks ago
regarding...: I think we should be friends, especially since I read this poem. In chinese astrology I'm a monkey. .so it seems fate had brought us together.   paul
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nightlight1220 commented on: Don't Take It Personally? by Anonymous 11 years 28 weeks ago
Maybe those same people who: Maybe those same people who do not like the things mentioned would take it personally if someone didn't want to watch football or listen to the eff bomb? I just take everything with a grain of salt these day. Takes all kinds to make a world...but the poem is good because it gets across the indignation. Nice, Karen.
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nightlight1220 commented on: Hearten gnomes by Anonymous 11 years 28 weeks ago
Moldy headcorner stones on a: Moldy headcorner stones on a structure give it character when viewed through the right spectacle.
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nightlight1220 commented on: The battle for your sight by Anonymous 11 years 28 weeks ago
hahaha!: hahaha!
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Mardigan (not verified) commented on:
A mind stained with history by Anonymous 11 years 28 weeks ago
So glad you enjoyed it :): So glad you enjoyed it :)
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Mardigan (not verified) commented on:
The battle for your sight by Anonymous 11 years 28 weeks ago
Too many? hehehe... Consider: Too many? hehehe... Consider it part of the lazy icing 
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nightlight1220 commented on: The battle for your sight by Anonymous 11 years 28 weeks ago
I would like it better: I would like it better without the advertisement of the catastrphes...lol.
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nightlight1220 commented on: A mind stained with history by Anonymous 11 years 28 weeks ago
Oh, Mardigan.... wow oh wow: Oh, Mardigan.... wow oh wow oh wow.... love this.
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Tides combed with flame by Anonymous 11 years 28 weeks ago
Thank you both. : Thank you both. 
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nightlight1220 commented on: Tides combed with flame by Anonymous 11 years 28 weeks ago
I have an image of a homeless: I have an image of a homeless person with this poem, who is broken, yet putting every effort towards some sort of stabe environment through his/her trials of life. It made me feel compassion. Nice, mardigan.
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running_with_rabbits commented on: Jewel in the bedrock by Anonymous 11 years 28 weeks ago
I feel slightly jipped, I had: I feel slightly jipped, I had trouble reading this, not because of the words but because the title said bedrock and then that stupid song got stuck in my head and it was blaring while I read this...I blame the radio for the distruction of art ;P
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running_with_rabbits commented on: Tides combed with flame by Anonymous 11 years 28 weeks ago
I love the imagery and the: I love the imagery and the way you chose to express the guilt, corrosive, its just so real and raw, that is EXACTLY how guilt feels me, pleasureful read
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Mardigan (not verified) commented on:
Jewel in the bedrock by Anonymous 11 years 29 weeks ago
Hahaha, that's great haha, Im: Hahaha, that's great haha, Im so glad you liked it. And please, dance away. I really like your writings too btw. 
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nightlight1220 commented on: I give to you my beliefs in a pretty package by Anonymous 11 years 29 weeks ago
Yes...like opening a gift: Yes...like opening a gift wrapped box from tiffany's that has something like cat do-do in it. I know someone who actually was gifted that once.
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