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Poetic_Eyes (not verified) commented on:

thanks: thanks. there is nothing simple about love, but this is a fictional piece.

Poetic_Eyes (not verified) commented on:

thank you.: thank you for reading and commenting on my work. i've added a couple of newer pieces, but mostly am re=posting previous works. i have them in categories to make it easier for my readers and allow you to embark on the journey of my poetry. i hope you enjoy your ride with my muse. 

funny..: I was just listening to Tom Waits Army Ants, which talks about praying mantis eating the head off its mate. 

impyshideout (not verified) commented on:

.: I really like this. Haven't seen you on here before. Glad for the read. :)

Fingers of Fiction: You have a way with poets...thanks, I've been identified ~~A~~

Futility As Nevermore: Dying trees and disturbed forests, Batman! I felt the desolation also in dim flickering light. This poem rides with Pathos. Masterfully done and darkly ~~A~~

Art In The Eye: "Art is in the eye of the beholder," the poet said. "No it is not," the metaphysician surrealists replied. "Art is the exudation of strong emotional balance." ~~A~~

Affirmation (not verified) commented on:

Thanks. After writing loads: Thanks. After writing loads of poems trying to come up with the right title is harder than writing the poem itself :)

:) I loved ever bit of: :) I loved ever bit of this! I also love how you use the comment to add to the poem, like it is just as much a part of the poem as the title and body is!

:) that one left me: :) that one left me breatheless!   

Positives and Attitudes: Great write ~~A~~

I Love The Title: RealiZation strikes sometimes and you change. Just being able to say I have and will change is a milestone moment. Not wanting to deconstruct anyone, but mirrors are nice places to start accepting the insides ~~A~~

solid voice: sounded very relaxed and natural. Hardest thing to accomplish. Lively and interesting writing

This is great! Cheers SS : This is great! Cheers SS 

alanacheng101 (not verified) commented on:

Thank you so much for taking: Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem :)

daniieGigglez (not verified) commented on:

Oh Gosh thank you For the: Oh Gosh thank you For the support. I just have 2 more years til im 18 an im trying to make it to graduation so I can finally leave. But the abuse is making it harder for me to think straight. Thank you(:

Mardigan (not verified) commented on:

The frustrations of writing: The frustrations of writing make it well worth it when it means something to others. Keep well. :)

Mardigan (not verified) commented on:

Thanks :-): Thanks :-)

eminemfan20042 (not verified) commented on:

Thank you :): Thank you :)

eminemfan20042 (not verified) commented on:

Honestly everything happens: Honestly everything happens for a reason ill realize that reason one day but thank you it means a lot. :)

No opposites, antitheses: like water and fire like the saint and the robber...I love lists and pairs in verse...and these are so very nice, fine even~A

Outstanding!: Beautifully written, uncomplicated, yet profound!

Excellent!: Marvelously written and very profound! Great poem!

Mardigan (not verified) commented on:

I'm ecstatic that you're: I'm ecstatic that you're interested enough to want clarification on it! On the line Through the power of thought only am I forbidden What I was saying is that we all have conditioned thoughts that we take to be true, such as this is good and that is bad, and as long as I keep indulging in them and taking them to be who I am, I am forbidden to live in peace. Indeed thoughts and imagination make a...