hey: hey healing. glad i got to laugh a little. this poem is so old i had totally forgotten i ever had it. i'm merging/blending some of my older poems with a new one or couple every so often.
thanks: thanks for noticing. this an older poem. the majority, not all of my poetry that the titles start with "..." are older pieces. glad you enjoy my work. i like your's as well.
i'm modernized...: i'm modernized. i don't believe in racism, discrimination, or any of the latter. however, we can't change what occured, but we can learn from it, educate, and expand as people. i love your replies to my poems. you can always post your poems on your page, but if you don't mind put it the comment section which poem inspired you. that way when people read it, it makes more sense to them. i do the...
thanks: thanks. i figured while i was updating i'd let you know which ones were published and in which book. i have some other ones that were published in newspapers, but the books are the most important.
healing...: healing...this is an older poem and i'm glad you can relate to me. i'm still in the process of re-adding my poetry, but i did write a new one last night and added this morning...that's under my fairy-tale section (log cabin sisterhood).
thanks: thanks inkstain. i was very close with my cousin and there were alot of things i didn't say or do with him that i would've liked. however writing really helped me deal with his death and i have faith he's a guardian angel and knows how missed, loved he is.
allets...: allets...this is older poem i wrote. my works changed a lot throughout the years, but it's good to show the variety of themes, styles, and my diversity of a writer. i really appreciate your support and friendship.
allets commented on: Freedom by Anonymous 11 years 38 weeks ago
Anarchy: is such an ugly word, but lots of folks want to do as they wish without concern for other folks - interesting write - have not seen "etc." in a poem in a while ~~A~~
I liked this one. It was very: I liked this one. It was very succinct, and so visually alive. The process seemed so exact that one could see the whole thing happening.
thanks: thanks smoothie. i've been re-adding my poetry. this is an older piece and glad you like it. like you, i'm i'm a writer/author/poetess at heart. whether i write fiction or non-fiction, a dedication or something in "general", and all that filters in between, in the depths of my soul i'm a poetess and no one's going to change that. that's one of the things we have common and why we get along/...
mrpoofs...: mrpoofs...that's exactly the song we "re-wrote." i have other poetry that i've written with "songs" in my head. thanks for adding the video. you're awesome.
Thanks for the critique, I: Thanks for the critique, I suppose I could work on the punctuation and what not, this was something I jotted down in my notebook and posted on here.
:D: wow!! I really like this. I love the use of Cinderella in the context of this poem, and I like the line "outstretched like his hands cupping tea leaf hands" - I really like that, haha.
However I found this line confusing: "as crystal clear skies toothlessly smiles"
Should it be "smile"? Since skies is plural?
Anyway great job!!(:
Transition Condition: without punctuation, line breaks, or clear transitions between choices of continuations, I was a bit lost, but in the lostness, found a strange cohesion - the voyage like lies like leaves and bombs are surreal and all are equal before the end arrives ~~A~~