Mardigan, i have often: Mardigan, i have often thought about this. It began as thoughts about how the mind can manifest just abut anything, and then I began asking myself if there really was such a thing as 'free will'. In the bible it teaches that god gave us 'free will', but I now think that was misinterpreted. I think that what we have is 'free choice', because I think our minds are connected to a much more complex...
I felt like I was starting a: I felt like I was starting a trip or something-
"And with a click, a sigh, a bang
Father time takes strides in front of meNothing endedFor the clock still ticksAs it spirals on and on"
So much mental imagery of the reality, physical form and the essence... it just makes sence to me.
I enjoy how you made this Part I and Part II.
Such a great Idea, it gets the readers attention- there's more...
THIS is legit.
You are: THIS is legit.
You are awakening as so are many other people in this world. I hope you keep your head up, because some days you may see this world as hell and others you will realise things are just the same and you couldn't believe in negativity.
I love your imagery.: I love your imagery. Sometimes I write poems about things, people, places and feelings I wish to remember. And the years later when I go back to read them I'm transported back to that place in time.
Love it!! One thing stood out: Love it!! One thing stood out for me...
Fear is the struggle of keeping your depression/anxiety under control and having medications available... Because it's hard to distinguish whether you fear the medications being there...or you fear the loss of the medications being there... see what I mean? But otherwise it only speaks of your amazing gift. <3
Ruse Sent Attention: Poets take the plunge, experiment, go where no writer has gone before. I enjoyed this vocabulary expanding beyond the rhyme and the syntax - stretched to othernesses and placings that live where you live and invite us to see - nice one ~~A~~
thanks: thanks smoothie. hugs. i've taken a new sort of challenge with my poetry and took to writing about different sorts of animation. had to put my own spin on it.
This poem deserves a sequel: Beautiful poem on a compelling setting, and definitely the readers' interest in the persona suggests a sequel with additional detail.
I like your blued eyed poetry... : Through my eyes, I see a masterpiece of art.
Through my eyes, everything is all right.
Through my eyes, the world is a beautiful place.
And through my eyes, I also create.
Sometimes it's ugly, sometimes great.
But always, I just plain like to relate.
With anything and everyone.
I'm really just here to have some fun.
Paint a picture, I'd love to view.
I'm always delighted to see something new.
And...
I'd qualify that as solitude,: I'd qualify that as solitude, you're not having actual human interaction. It's through a device where you don't have to worry about who you are, you're as if a ghost and what not. So yea I think that's solitude.
Somehow by the end I was: Somehow by the end I was thinking, I enjoy solitude. But then I realized I'm always somehow connected Through some sort of device. So can I really call I solitude?