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S74rw4rd commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Тропарь 2 Peter 3:9 by S74rw4rd123d 4 weeks 15 hours ago
Thank you, and I appreciate: Thank you, and I appreciate your profound insights.
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djtj commented on: Bed-time Routine by djtj 4 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you for the read and comment: I am not familiar with Josephine's headache, or are you just referencing the headache thing at bed in general? :) There's a joke about the husband bringing aspirin to the wife in bed... I was hoping to protray his obvious lack of awareness of blazing lights and unlocked door. This was a boyfriend, a guest in the house, so not really his responsibility to secure the fortress. But I have a feeling because he lived with roommates, blazing lights and unlocked doors were not his concern when he closed his bedroom door for the night. But the comment, why do you take so long to go to bed...lovely fellow, but seriously dude? Especially at our age. The new boyfriend looks for undone things, quite nice.  
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djtj commented on: boarding pass by redbrick 4 weeks 1 day ago
Nice: A visually attractive poem using every day objects like a boarding pass and key to illistrate a ride a journey through life and love. Nice.
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redbrick commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Тропарь 2 Peter 3:9 by S74rw4rd123d 4 weeks 1 day ago
Repentance is a daily groove,: Repentance is a daily groove, much like dying daily to self and continuing sanctification, very Pauline in thought and practise.
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redbrick commented on: Bed-time Routine by djtj 4 weeks 1 day ago
Not to be indelicate to: Not to be indelicate to anyone but reminds me of Josephine's headache; but this is more progressive. Our bedtime rituals at home are quite complex as well... requiring a synchronous effort like synchronised swimming (Esther Williams comes to mind there) otherwise flicking too many switches and getting back up to double check if anything is amiss or forgotten.... Eventually someone snores first and sleeps through the night. Love the final line - it brings all the strands together beautifully.
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redbrick commented on: Turning to Light by patriciajj 4 weeks 1 day ago
I could remember finishing: I could remember finishing the statement about the hibiscus, just saw some in full bloom on the way to work. I love the image and movement that these blooms are a self-soothing hug of the Earth 
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redbrick commented on: panhandler’s timepiece by redbrick 4 weeks 1 day ago
The pulse of life captured in: The pulse of life captured in poetic lines, that is often the fish that tries to get away. Thanks kindly, pjj
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SSmoothie commented on: Klip (It’s a Mime Show) by Pungus 4 weeks 1 day ago
Yes absolutely poem is a: Yes absolutely poem is a prayer a hope on the wind with the power to realise truths and dreams... 
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Jesster commented on: Broke horse by Jesster 4 weeks 2 days ago
Sad story!: I still love horses
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patriciajj commented on: Turning to Light by patriciajj 4 weeks 2 days ago
Thank you, stellar Poet, for: Thank you, stellar Poet, for the honor of your presence; that alone is gratifying, but I was particularly moved by your breathtaking view of my work and the fact that you narrowed your focus to the heart of my message.    You made my day!   
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patriciajj commented on: panhandler’s timepiece by redbrick 4 weeks 2 days ago
I was delighted by the: I was delighted by the deftness of your creation: the way your cunning metaphor is carried on a stride of lilting meter, not unlike the pulse of our lives in the hands of a rambling “panhandler”.    A brilliant look at our relentless captor.   
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redbrick commented on: Weight, there’s more by Teytonon 4 weeks 2 days ago
The neck up brought me back: The neck up brought me back to that old movie where the mad scientists wife got decapitated in a car accident. For me, it's my belly that's not cooperating, dieting or otherwise  
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redbrick commented on: Broke horse by Jesster 4 weeks 2 days ago
Brought me back to that let: Brought me back to that let down when dad clinically explained how horses to be useful and happy needed to be broken in... I felt broken down and he totally missed the mark there. I lost my love of horses and developed an allergy to horse hair. Lol.
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redbrick commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Тропарь Psalm 118:5 by S74rw4rd123d 4 weeks 2 days ago
The outstanding "unwavering": The outstanding "unwavering" nature and esteem of His faithfulness brings absolute assurance to the faithful.
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redbrick commented on: afterparty by redbrick 4 weeks 2 days ago
Your much appreciated: Don't know much about 'supreme,' but much valued and appreciated comments are sustenance to the writing soul. Thank you
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