afterparty

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2006

When tempest subsides
in the barren moors, 
silence swells, 
filling the void. 

 

Tears fall, 
carving paths on skin, 
yet bring a moist clarity, 
mending broken places. 
 

The grass whispers 
secrets of rebirth, 
each drop a promise, 
each tear a renewal. 


The horizon stretches, 
endless, with hope 
seeping into the soil. 
 

In this moment, 
life whispers softly 
in the language of 
rain and silence.

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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karlmcallister's picture

Nice!

Wow! What striking imagery, vulnerabke, sore and yet hopeful and full of possibility. 

 

Thanks!

redbrick's picture

That's quite what it's like

That's quite what it's like after a hurricabe


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S74rw4rd123d's picture

Your supreme verbal skill is

Your supreme verbal skill is well attested and demonstrated by this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!


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redbrick's picture

Your much appreciated

Don't know much about 'supreme,' but much valued and appreciated comments are sustenance to the writing soul. Thank you


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

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