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sweetwater commented on: Sordid by Stephen 3 days 13 hours ago
I like this very much :-): I like this very much :-) sue.
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S74RW4RD commented on: July 10th, A Saturday In 1976 by J-C4113d 3 days 20 hours ago
Thank you for that very: Thank you for that very encouraging comment.  There is still more to come, as Starward morphs into J-Called..  Although I do not fully understand the path upon which God has placed me, nor fully understand the terrain that surrounds my path, my Faith tells me to continue because there are great promises and joys at the conclusion of that path. I very much appreciate your kind words, and the time you invested in reading my essay.
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cynosure commented on: Green Eyes In Shadow’s Silhouette by cynosure 4 days 5 hours ago
He is now on Rainbow Bridge RIP Mr Kitty: Mr Kitty is now no longer in pain and at rest.    I, on the other hand, am a big mess.   But I need to get it together for a client soon.   The vet says she can’t smell where he voided on me.    I can’t smell anything as I’m full of tears and mucus.
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cynosure commented on: July 10th, A Saturday In 1976 by J-C4113d 4 days 5 hours ago
Thank you for sharing: Your celebratory journey of self-discovery and transformation is an amazing read. It is also unfortunately, at times, much too relatable reading of those difficulties and struggles you faced. However, hearing how you were able to shed those old, socially enforced identities and embrace a new one that truly resonated with you, is powerful. The way you describe finding your handle, Starwatcher, is so beautifully. It is so important to see and learn how you found the strength and freedom through this process. The bond you formed with BlueShift and the adventures you shared with your c.b. radio sound like truly transformative, magical memories that shaped your path. Thank you for sharing this moment of growth and liberation with us.
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S74RW4RD commented on: Hands Down The Absolute Worst Poem Anyone’s Ever Written by life_used_to_be... 4 days 5 hours ago
I disagree with the poem's: I disagree with the poem's titlel  The poem is powerfully poignant.
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weepingwoman commented on: The Trivial & Boring... by weepingwoman 6 days 11 hours ago
Addendums, Annotations, Footnotes... :    quotes that I actually remember the sources of or which book I read them in or where I might have heard it or who may have said it...  "The difference between the almost-right word & the right word is the difference between the lightning bug and the lightning" - Mark Twain     
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hollow.point commented on: Where are you by ChryWizard 6 days 18 hours ago
I am sorry for your: I am sorry for your condition, and I'm sorry that you lost from the hope that you grasped all the things that it cost, in the end we're alone but not because we didn't try - rather hope is not sure, even why did I try.     i like flowers and beautiful things like clothes, but alas I have none, not even a single Rose.
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cynosure commented on: Own You Owe You by tallsquirrelgirl 1 week 4 days ago
Compelling write: This poem is a beautiful exploration of attraction, desire and power complexities. I was quite taken with the imagery of "styrofoam matchstick earthquake girl", which created a vivid and unique picture. The repetition of "too many" and the contrast between wanting to own and owe someone adds depth to the emotions portrayed. The references to frequencies and vibrations add a musical quality to the poem. I felt this poem enhances the emotional impact and that makes it such a compelling read. Powerful and evocative, thank you. Brilliant work!
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Pingus commented on: Sandwich (2024 challenge day 32) by tallsquirrelgirl 1 week 5 days ago
Not so challenging, it would appear: Hey, these little Poetry 'challenges' of yours are paying off so divinely the result I cant stop myself from savoring the beauty and truth of your sweet, despairing sandwiches. But so delicious, and well worth the trip to the grocery store, you know, for more and more.
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Pingus commented on: One for the money, two for the show by Teytonon 1 week 5 days ago
Literally shit on a biscuit: Dude, stop posting this shit and learn to write, like actually.
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weepingwoman commented on: D's Critique/Analysis of... by weepingwoman 1 week 5 days ago
D's Favorite Lines... :     of the moment...  subtexted Res Ipsa Loquitur... subjected to Tabula Rasa... at D's whim & fancy...  I forever take refuge...  sway with me baby... you put the lighter inside this man... you're so fine, lose my mind and the world seems to disappear... oh girl I'll build your wishing well... and I'll fix your old beat-up Chevy truck and make it run like new again... your mountain of firewood isn't big enough... I'll be back tomorrow with more... of whatever you need... I'm here to take care of all your problems even before you have them...  the love you've got is only all the love that I would ever need... I'm your huckleberry... exactly the way Val says it... and I'm you're daisy Doc... damn you look good in that hat... tuckle up yourself with me... find what you love and let it kill you... all sciences are not the wisdom true... many seeming thats are not THE That... many trees bear nought of fruit... make lonely caves thy home paternal... and solitude thy paradise... omvajrasattvasamaya... Hail Mary Full of Grace...  
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S74RW4RD commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Troparion At Matthew 6:10 by J-C4113d 1 week 5 days ago
Thank you very muxh.: Thank you very muxh.
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osiriss- commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Troparion At Matthew 6:10 by J-C4113d 1 week 6 days ago
Lord, I pray this man has: Lord, I pray this man has life and love for all the ages to come
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osiriss- commented on: Right Here With You by DaveBrowder 1 week 6 days ago
I really like your poetry: I really like your poetry
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weepingwoman commented on: Circular File #2 by weepingwoman 2 weeks 1 day ago
these have already been sifted through... :       to question my virtue is an act of treason...  him and the imp are doing an act at McKenna's Treehouse...  hey look madlibs... in the back of the closet...  Christian LaCroix for the House of My Sweet Dakini... pink patent leather...  vegan... with white polka dots... in the back of the closet... hey D I found a hole in the back of the closet... I'm sure that's where they're coming in... hey where did those queer eye guys go... now I lay me down to sleep...  I heard he can do this thing with his tongue...  she can do it with anything... just give her 1 line... I can't find my voice... I think she left it over by the well... has anyone seen D's gloves... oh no girl those are real... there were 3 of them... Tyrion to the set of 300...  tell Hagrid to bring in the Medusa... she definitely seems to be experiencing some sort of... tell him I don't want to talk about my mother anymore... who let him in here... he got it from Biff... he's not a real doctor... I found this stethoscope over by the well... she thinks she can control it... no Hunter you tell her she can't have another piece of birthday cake ... 3000 degrees... found on Mars... in her desk in her cave... in the Himalayas... is that some new guy she's dating... no he's gay... Enhancing Lotion over on aisle 3... looks like peanut butter to me... it's completely unintelligible... undecipherable... nah that's right... who's the new guy... I think his name is Miketoo... we need to hose her down... bring the pink elephant to me... too hot... too cold... fever of 3000 degrees... call Dr. Jones... could be Atlantean in origin... she has relatives there... I thought you burned that letter... she won't open it... not even the baby aspirin... probst called... snookie called... there's a situation under the whomping willow... call the creepy grounds keeper... Scooby Doo Be Doo... where are you... I found this mystery machine keychain... the dam is about to break... we need another box of Kleenex... here's the little Dutch boy... finally took his finger out of the damn dam... regularly scheduled programming...  there's a twister coming... and it's heading my way... sometimes I grow so tired... dinner with Led Zeppelin... at Johnny's place... on the island of Eros... ramble on... nows the time... the time is now... wake up D! you fell asleep for a minute and a half... we had a pact... Johnny called...  he needs us... spotted on the island of Eros... at the reopening of the viper room... vip only...  blue feather boas for the whole audience...  and spotted faux fur snow lion lined gloves... hey check out the gift bag... look it's the mother of undying time... on the red carpet...  with the gatekeeper to the unknown... at the Dakini-themed met gala... I will be your shepherd in the night... say it 3 times... and click your heels together...  don't give that to her... it's too early... can't be imitated... a new kind of comedy... surfing the zuvuya... Aquaman called... no that didn't work either... oh no she just pulled the devil card... ai o dios mio... and the hierophant... that's good right... who's the knight of swords... is that some new guy she's dating... Daario Naharis called... which one... nevermind send them both in... he pledges his sword to you... we should check IMDB ... or Wikipedia... or HBO... do not Google him... we'll have to shut production down for the day... GoT marathon... whoop whoop ... honey grab that jar of peanut butter... look it's that cute delivery boy again... Grandmeister Tarley called... they need a new props guy at the wall... aieee she pulled the I've known you for lifetimes oracle card... so romantic... stop trying to force feed me... we could watch GoT and HotD at the same time...   and ozzy found this in her underwater grotto on the island of Eros: §∆¥€E=Mπ√¢£∆¥€^√π¥€¢∆£¥€∆§π√✓✓✓^°1+1=3@#$$$$$$$  
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