praying it all works out.: praying it all works out. good write!
trail of breadcrumbs: to me this reads like a riddle and a dandy proper one also
Oooo, balloon bible baboons!: Oooo, balloon bible baboons! Got me feeling tipsy too!
Stop deleting your stuff!!!: Stop deleting your stuff!!! Where did the bit about Zelda's glinting necklace go??? That one had me hypnotized!!!
Short, but sweet..: Short, but sweet. I'm blown away.
What great poetry you write.: I think you just exhale and it appears on paper.
You old fart: You will probably outlive me if you continue writing poetry like this. This one is a great composition.
She's never been the bearer: She's never been the bearer of good news either, I suppose.
Thanks my dear Fellow poet: Thanks my dear Fellow poet
Thank you. : Thank you.
Hello to you too..: Hello to you too. Thank you for your kind comment. Welcome to Postpoems!
Hi. Without using..: Hi. Without using 'flowery' words, as many poets do, you created a poem with substantial emotional impact. Well done!
Hello fellow poet: That is a very well Written poem
thank you :): thank you :)
thank you so much :): thank you so much :)