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Infatuation is fun up to a: Infatuation is fun up to a point.  You just have to know when to let it go and move on with your life.  It's only a problem if you allow it to turn into an obsession and then it can own you. 

Your dedication is a precious: Your dedication is a precious gift because this intoxicating potion of words is precious. And I would praise it just as much without the generous dedication.   First, the gateway line: "Immersive nature". It opens the door dramatically, and invites us to be baptized in your cleverly composed river of truth.    The juxtaposition of "stars and stones" and the implication that both are equally astounding, because all creation is a miracle, was vital understanding as was the multilayered significance of "nectars and sweetness"   Like many great writers, you boldly coin words: "togethering" Loving that!   With the grace of Eastern poetry and the delicate splendor of a Ming vase, your poem takes a profound turn and tunnels deep with a contemplation on Oneness. And how do we achieve a true, transcendental connection to all things and the Creator itself?   "Stars and stones; seas and shores; fields and flowers:  do not climb between, upon, or over; rather, be drawn among, or, intensely with."   Breathtaking ripples in the pool of understanding.   One of your best to date.

"Togethering" is such an all: "Togethering" is such an all encapsulating concept! The intensely amongness is quite catching.

Thank you for understanding.: Thank you for understanding.

As it is being read one can: As it is being read one can hear the humming and chanting. Perhaps we have Hollywood to thank for that, the silverscreen generation.

The sound of this fine poem: The sound of this fine poem aspires toward music . . . it almost as its own melody playing as one reads through the lines.