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redbrick commented on: descent by redbrick 5 weeks 4 days ago
Both angles valid and: Both angles valid and required. So it's all for us to be glad of them being thusly so 
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redbrick commented on: they come asking, again by redbrick 5 weeks 4 days ago
That is why the next poem was: That is why the next poem was an attempt to clarify the pronoun-shenanigans
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Pungus commented on: they come asking, again by redbrick 5 weeks 4 days ago
The shift from pronouns makes: The shift from pronouns makes for an interesting riddle: who's who? I like how the 'you' seems to address both the narrator and audience simultaneously.
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Pungus commented on: descent by redbrick 5 weeks 4 days ago
Yes, I see precisely what you: Yes, I see precisely what you mean, the message we sense in the final stanza there especially draws that contrast; whereas mine may be patriarchal, yours is much more positive.
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redbrick commented on: blotting pad by Pungus 5 weeks 5 days ago
Quite a complement to the: Quite a complement to the poem: "descent"; it's the other side of that coin and its opposite sound. 
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ramonathompsont commented on: Miserable by metaphorist 6 weeks 3 hours ago
Hope you feel better soon.: Hope you feel better soon. Remember tough times never last forever.
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Teytonon commented on: When I Gaze Upon Your Beauty by Jimi_Mayhem 6 weeks 5 hours ago
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alanarileycheng commented on: SWEET INFLICTION by alanarileycheng 6 weeks 1 day ago
Thank You: Hi there, and thank you so very much for taking the time to read my poem and I deeply appreciate it and I hope that you're having a lovely day! :)
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Teytonon commented on: SWEET INFLICTION by alanarileycheng 6 weeks 1 day ago
Shakespeare said it..: Shakespeare said it: 'To thine own self be true' Looks like you certainly are. Good for you! Thanks for posting.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: PRAYING FOR CHANGE by joy 6 weeks 4 days ago
Except the final line's "he: Except the final line's "he or she," this poem is EXCELLENT!!!!!
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: + 9TH POEMS: A Poem For January 1st, 2026 by S74rw4rd-13d 6 weeks 6 days ago
Thank you SO MUCH for those: Thank you SO MUCH for those words!
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redbrick commented on: + 9TH POEMS: A Poem For January 1st, 2026 by S74rw4rd-13d 6 weeks 6 days ago
We live because of the divine: We live because of the divine Poet, we being his poems bound for Eternity.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: To An Old Man Whose Doctors Believe That His Death Is Imminent by S74rw4rd-13d 6 weeks 6 days ago
Thank you very much for this: Thank you very much for this first comment of the new year---a year which brings a huge personal significance for me.
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Stephen commented on: To An Old Man Whose Doctors Believe That His Death Is Imminent by S74rw4rd-13d 7 weeks 14 hours ago
To An Old Man Whose Doctors Believe That His Death Is Imminent: "But about that day or hour no one knows, not even the angels in heaven, nor the Son, but only the Father" -- Matthew 24:36: 
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